Timben
Well-Known Member
I’m writing to you because I’m stuck on the Army Western story. I have 95 more pages to go. I've just about run out of ideas. This is what I’ve written so far:
Suddenly five Winchesters poked out of the widows. Paco began laughing. Paco turned to his fellow companeros and spoke again in Spanish, and began laughing again. Major Tanner wasn't pleased with them laughing. Then he began to laugh at himself. Suddenly, Paco went for his pistol, but Major Tanner was quicker on the draw. He pulled his pistol and fired, killing Paco and two other bandits. They fell backward from their horses dead. Major Tanner ran back inside just as his men fired at the bandits. Slaying them left and right. The sisters and Father He Ling and Lucius got down and crawled to safety. The bandits began circling the old mission, trying to get inside. Sergeant Connor and Titus both took off going after them.
"Didn't we leave this party?" asked Titus, firing his pistol at the bandits.
"Yeah, only they were Injuns," said Sergeant Connor.
Suddenly five Winchesters poked out of the widows. Paco began laughing. Paco turned to his fellow companeros and spoke again in Spanish, and began laughing again. Major Tanner wasn't pleased with them laughing. Then he began to laugh at himself. Suddenly, Paco went for his pistol, but Major Tanner was quicker on the draw. He pulled his pistol and fired, killing Paco and two other bandits. They fell backward from their horses dead. Major Tanner ran back inside just as his men fired at the bandits. Slaying them left and right. The sisters and Father He Ling and Lucius got down and crawled to safety. The bandits began circling the old mission, trying to get inside. Sergeant Connor and Titus both took off going after them.
"Didn't we leave this party?" asked Titus, firing his pistol at the bandits.
"Yeah, only they were Injuns," said Sergeant Connor.