Free! Abendau short story

[Jo Zebedee]

How Ealyn escaped from the prism cell:

JoZebwrites: CRACKS IN TIME - EALYN'S ESCAPE

 

[Boneman]

Ye!!!! So that's how he did it... excellent!

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Ye!!!! So that's how he did it... excellent!

I wrote it a while ago but wanted to let it stew as it was so tricky coming in and out of the past and myriad futures, that I wanted to be sure I had caught anywhere that tripped me up. And a call out to @thaddeus6th who gallantly did a beta read for me.

 

[Tanja Bisgaard]

That's a great idea! I have gotten to chapter 6 in the first book (a bit slow I'm afraid...)

 

[Jo Zebedee]

That's a great idea! I have gotten to chapter 6 in the first book (a bit slow I'm afraid...)

Ah. You'll remember chapter six

 

[Tanja Bisgaard]

Oh yes - that's was very dramatic! Intriguing story you have written! I was wondering about the title of the book - until chapter six which I read last night

 

[Tanja Bisgaard]

Ah. You'll remember chapter six

And by the way - are you posting that free story on other SM? Wondering what the effect is

 

[Jo Zebedee]

And by the way - are you posting that free story on other SM? Wondering what the effect is

It's on my blog, mentioned on facebook, twitter etc. It's had a couple of hundred hits to date.

I'm planning on a novella and short story anthology, so it will probably go into that, as well.

I have one free short for web subscribers only but I'm not sure that's an effective way to go - only about 30 people have read it to date.

 

[Tanja Bisgaard]

That sounds pretty good with a couple of hundred visits!