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    Jo Zebedee

    Jo Zebedee Come away, oh human child - Waters and the Wild

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    Boneman

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    Ye!!!! So that's how he did it... excellent!
     
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    Jo Zebedee

    Jo Zebedee Come away, oh human child - Waters and the Wild

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    I wrote it a while ago but wanted to let it stew as it was so tricky coming in and out of the past and myriad futures, that I wanted to be sure I had caught anywhere that tripped me up. And a call out to @thaddeus6th who gallantly did a beta read for me. :)
     
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    Tanja Bisgaard

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    That's a great idea! :) I have gotten to chapter 6 in the first book (a bit slow I'm afraid...)
     
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    Jo Zebedee

    Jo Zebedee Come away, oh human child - Waters and the Wild

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    Ah. You'll remember chapter six :)
     
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    Oh yes - that's was very dramatic! Intriguing story you have written! I was wondering about the title of the book - until chapter six which I read last night ;)
     
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    And by the way - are you posting that free story on other SM? Wondering what the effect is :D
     
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    Jo Zebedee

    Jo Zebedee Come away, oh human child - Waters and the Wild

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    It's on my blog, mentioned on facebook, twitter etc. It's had a couple of hundred hits to date.

    I'm planning on a novella and short story anthology, so it will probably go into that, as well.

    I have one free short for web subscribers only but I'm not sure that's an effective way to go - only about 30 people have read it to date.
     
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    Tanja Bisgaard

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    That sounds pretty good with a couple of hundred visits!
     
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