TonyHarmsworth
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The following two short introductory chapters are for a novel which was to published, but I heard yesterday that the publisher has ceased trading, so I'm thrown back onto my own resources.
What I am putting below would have been considered a sort of prologue A and prologue B, but, of course, prologues are no longer the flavour of the month. I have therefore shown them as two very short introductory chapters. They are only 700 words in total.
What do you guys think? The main story follows on from the end of the 2018 chapter.
SUPERNOVA
In 1368 the northern skies were as familiar to people as they had always been. With good eyesight, your view of the universe was as detailed as anyone’s had ever been.
Imagine lying on your back in the English countryside. You could admire Andromeda, the Plough and Orion. The blood-red star of Betelgeuse shone like a ruby in the top left of the astrological figure. To you, they would all look like tiny points. No one had any idea of distance or scale.
Betelgeuse is a huge star, almost six hundred and fifty light-years distant. Its diameter is a thousand times as great as our own sun. If it sat at the centre of our solar system, it is so large the orbit of the earth, indeed all the inner planets would sit within its diameter. It is gigantic and, one day it will explode.
But if you had been the person admiring Orion in 1368 you would have had no idea the massive star was collapsing inward at that very moment. It was turning supernova.
In a matter of microseconds, it collapsed and exploded in a process which created many of the minerals which are of such importance to us today. Gold, uranium and all the heavy elements plus many, like carbon, essential for the existence of life on Earth.
Unknown to any fourteenth century observer, the exploding star also produced an incredible pulse of gamma rays, gravitational waves and electromagnetic radiation.
The rays, waves and radiation travelled outwards at the speed of light. The fate of the Earth was sealed. In 2018 every creature on the planet would undergo a life-changing trauma.
2018
Betelgeuse lit up the sky like a second sun for more than an hour. It then faded, but remained too bright to look at directly with the naked eye.
Astronomers, like Doctor Geoffrey Arnold PhD, who happened to witness the event, were staggered by its brilliance. Electronic telescopes which captured the moment were ruined. Anyone watching Betelgeuse when it exploded, through binoculars or a small telescope would have been blinded for life.
Geoff Arnold telephoned many of his colleagues soon after the supernova was seen. This was an event of, well, astronomic proportions. Radio telescopes and other equipment were directed towards the supernova, gaining and recording enormous volumes of data for study. Astronomers all over the world had been desperate to observe a supernova close up. Six hundred and fifty light-years was really close, so provided a wonderful opportunity for research.
Geoff was worried about the gamma rays and other radiation which might be bombarding the earth. He set up a meeting at the Royal Institution for the following morning, with his boss, Dr. Justin Mayweather and several other top astronomers and physicists.
The next day, he boarded the 7.25am train from Guildford to Waterloo. As he took his seat and the express left the station, he could see Orion was about to set, still brilliant despite the sunshine. It was impossible to look directly at it and he wore his sunglasses. All the passengers were talking about the phenomenon and discussing what it might be. Geoff kept quiet. He was busy marshalling his thoughts for the meeting. He’d left his laptop at the Royal Institution the previous day, so was making notes in an old Filofax.
The Waterloo express accelerated through the Surrey countryside en route to the capital, but no sooner had it departed than our own sun, Sol, perhaps in sympathy with the dying Betelgeuse, ejected one of the most extraordinary solar flares. Eight minutes later the gamma rays and other electromagnetic radiation from the flare would impact with the radiation bombarding Earth from Betelgeuse.
In the instant those waves collided, 8.15am Greenwich Mean Time, every animal and person in the world underwent the most unexpected and catastrophic change for which Geoff would later coin the term, Mindslip. He and others tell of the trauma the radiation caused and how it affected their own lives.
Geoff Arnold is not a superhero any more than the other seven billion people on Earth. Mindslip charts his path through the disaster which followed. The fact he had some fringe significance in understanding the event and helping to resolve the chaos is immaterial.
He recounts his story as a new world order dawns.
What I am putting below would have been considered a sort of prologue A and prologue B, but, of course, prologues are no longer the flavour of the month. I have therefore shown them as two very short introductory chapters. They are only 700 words in total.
What do you guys think? The main story follows on from the end of the 2018 chapter.
SUPERNOVA
In 1368 the northern skies were as familiar to people as they had always been. With good eyesight, your view of the universe was as detailed as anyone’s had ever been.
Imagine lying on your back in the English countryside. You could admire Andromeda, the Plough and Orion. The blood-red star of Betelgeuse shone like a ruby in the top left of the astrological figure. To you, they would all look like tiny points. No one had any idea of distance or scale.
Betelgeuse is a huge star, almost six hundred and fifty light-years distant. Its diameter is a thousand times as great as our own sun. If it sat at the centre of our solar system, it is so large the orbit of the earth, indeed all the inner planets would sit within its diameter. It is gigantic and, one day it will explode.
But if you had been the person admiring Orion in 1368 you would have had no idea the massive star was collapsing inward at that very moment. It was turning supernova.
In a matter of microseconds, it collapsed and exploded in a process which created many of the minerals which are of such importance to us today. Gold, uranium and all the heavy elements plus many, like carbon, essential for the existence of life on Earth.
Unknown to any fourteenth century observer, the exploding star also produced an incredible pulse of gamma rays, gravitational waves and electromagnetic radiation.
The rays, waves and radiation travelled outwards at the speed of light. The fate of the Earth was sealed. In 2018 every creature on the planet would undergo a life-changing trauma.
2018
Betelgeuse lit up the sky like a second sun for more than an hour. It then faded, but remained too bright to look at directly with the naked eye.
Astronomers, like Doctor Geoffrey Arnold PhD, who happened to witness the event, were staggered by its brilliance. Electronic telescopes which captured the moment were ruined. Anyone watching Betelgeuse when it exploded, through binoculars or a small telescope would have been blinded for life.
Geoff Arnold telephoned many of his colleagues soon after the supernova was seen. This was an event of, well, astronomic proportions. Radio telescopes and other equipment were directed towards the supernova, gaining and recording enormous volumes of data for study. Astronomers all over the world had been desperate to observe a supernova close up. Six hundred and fifty light-years was really close, so provided a wonderful opportunity for research.
Geoff was worried about the gamma rays and other radiation which might be bombarding the earth. He set up a meeting at the Royal Institution for the following morning, with his boss, Dr. Justin Mayweather and several other top astronomers and physicists.
The next day, he boarded the 7.25am train from Guildford to Waterloo. As he took his seat and the express left the station, he could see Orion was about to set, still brilliant despite the sunshine. It was impossible to look directly at it and he wore his sunglasses. All the passengers were talking about the phenomenon and discussing what it might be. Geoff kept quiet. He was busy marshalling his thoughts for the meeting. He’d left his laptop at the Royal Institution the previous day, so was making notes in an old Filofax.
The Waterloo express accelerated through the Surrey countryside en route to the capital, but no sooner had it departed than our own sun, Sol, perhaps in sympathy with the dying Betelgeuse, ejected one of the most extraordinary solar flares. Eight minutes later the gamma rays and other electromagnetic radiation from the flare would impact with the radiation bombarding Earth from Betelgeuse.
In the instant those waves collided, 8.15am Greenwich Mean Time, every animal and person in the world underwent the most unexpected and catastrophic change for which Geoff would later coin the term, Mindslip. He and others tell of the trauma the radiation caused and how it affected their own lives.
Geoff Arnold is not a superhero any more than the other seven billion people on Earth. Mindslip charts his path through the disaster which followed. The fact he had some fringe significance in understanding the event and helping to resolve the chaos is immaterial.
He recounts his story as a new world order dawns.