Erebus - The Blurb

Nice cover Ralph, and yeah that last blurb looks good. I agree with @hopewrites though, so would go with 'those responsible' rather than the one. Keeps more
Those responsible it is :)

Zmunkz, a good point, however the vision of the future is somewhat utopian yet starts in an anarchic country where non-interventionist policies from other nations have led to it not being a nice place. I believe it would be too much of a discord to to not show that as within the first few pages our poor MC is investigating a massacre.

I'm happy to freeze it now. With the amendment mentioned.

Of course, if anyone spots anything major, please shout up.

Once again thank you. The Chrons gets a mention in the acknowledgements so know that means you chaps specifically and the chrons generally.
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