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How best (least intrusively, with least confusion) to write internal monologue in close third person?
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. "Am I getting old?" she thought. "I used to love company."
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. Am I getting old? I used to love company.
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. Was she getting old? She used to love company.
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. "Am I getting old?" she thought. "I used to love company."
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. Am I getting old? I used to love company.
The three of them together made her living room uncomfortably packed. Was she getting old? She used to love company.