Was given a few thrillers from various authors by my sister-in-law. Wasn't sure what to pick up so I started to read opening lines.
Blood Line by Lynda La Plante started really strong, so I picked that up.
However, after the prologue, was surprised to find chapter 1 was almost entirely dialogue with almost no attributions, two quick character infodumps, and a headhop between each of the two characters.
The writing continues to see technically weak, not least in terms of POV. We're not close to the protagonist at all, but every now and then the author visibly steps in to explain something about her.
Not a bad book, though. Initial impressions are that the entire plot has been given away in Chapter 1. The blurb on the back suggests otherwise, so I'll stick with it.
Blood Line by Lynda La Plante started really strong, so I picked that up.
However, after the prologue, was surprised to find chapter 1 was almost entirely dialogue with almost no attributions, two quick character infodumps, and a headhop between each of the two characters.
The writing continues to see technically weak, not least in terms of POV. We're not close to the protagonist at all, but every now and then the author visibly steps in to explain something about her.
Not a bad book, though. Initial impressions are that the entire plot has been given away in Chapter 1. The blurb on the back suggests otherwise, so I'll stick with it.