Another useful critique.
Fancy a critique by Mark Lawrence?
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psychotick
Dangerously confused
Hi Boneman,
That's not true. I imagine every man in creation would think a non-response from a firing squad when the commander gives the order to fire would be extremely positive!
Cheers, Greg.
That's not true. I imagine every man in creation would think a non-response from a firing squad when the commander gives the order to fire would be extremely positive!
Cheers, Greg.
ZombieWife
all hail zombiecat!
He actually gives some great feedback. I don't know why people consider this harsh? From what I read of the samples he's posted, he is offering solid advice. Tempted to submit myself.
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