Hey guys,
I've been working with an agent on my picture book and the response from the publishers has been that they like the artwork but don't find the story compelling enough. As a result, I've gone back to the narrative and done a complete rewrite and I was hoping to get a couple of opinions on it before I send it back through.
At the moment, I'm asking if anyone's interested in reading the first 5 panels (touches in at 800 words) and telling me if the story grabs them, and if it's immediately obvious whose perspective the story is being told through.
I'm a bit reluctant to post the 5 panels here though as it's nearly half the book so, assuming the mods are okay with it, I'd like to send the links through pm. I checked the rules and didn't see anything mentioning this one way or another, so I hope I'm not breaking the rules on this one.
If anyone is interested then it would be a huge help, and I'm always happy to return the favour.
Cheers
Luke
I've been working with an agent on my picture book and the response from the publishers has been that they like the artwork but don't find the story compelling enough. As a result, I've gone back to the narrative and done a complete rewrite and I was hoping to get a couple of opinions on it before I send it back through.
At the moment, I'm asking if anyone's interested in reading the first 5 panels (touches in at 800 words) and telling me if the story grabs them, and if it's immediately obvious whose perspective the story is being told through.
I'm a bit reluctant to post the 5 panels here though as it's nearly half the book so, assuming the mods are okay with it, I'd like to send the links through pm. I checked the rules and didn't see anything mentioning this one way or another, so I hope I'm not breaking the rules on this one.
If anyone is interested then it would be a huge help, and I'm always happy to return the favour.
Cheers
Luke