anthorn
Well-Known Member
I have a plot, two plots, that a running together and should link but I am having trouble seeing how they do. It's steampunk fantasy
I have a gang leader who has taken control of most of Lull's criminal underworld. She's using a boy whose sister was killed as the assassin by claiming he is killing those responsible for his sister's death. Her main goal is to kill the Queen of the country when she comes to open Parliament.
The other plot is about a very successful merchant company that has grown so large it is almost a bank. Ullii, the woman running the Lull branch, discovers that someone has been falsifying contracts and syphoning monies for unknown purposes. When she sends her assistant to the bank to cancel the contracts before the assailant can claim the money, the assistant ends up dead with those contracts stuffed in her mouth. At the same time, she has to deal with her father sending her younger siblings to a school in Lull and the responsibility this entails.
Don't know how to link them as they seem to be running separately.
I have a gang leader who has taken control of most of Lull's criminal underworld. She's using a boy whose sister was killed as the assassin by claiming he is killing those responsible for his sister's death. Her main goal is to kill the Queen of the country when she comes to open Parliament.
The other plot is about a very successful merchant company that has grown so large it is almost a bank. Ullii, the woman running the Lull branch, discovers that someone has been falsifying contracts and syphoning monies for unknown purposes. When she sends her assistant to the bank to cancel the contracts before the assailant can claim the money, the assistant ends up dead with those contracts stuffed in her mouth. At the same time, she has to deal with her father sending her younger siblings to a school in Lull and the responsibility this entails.
Don't know how to link them as they seem to be running separately.