I haven't written anything for a while, so I decided to plop down and do just that. This is what I spun out. Is it written well? And more importantly, do you think it's worth developing into a story?
The sun was right at the top of the sky by the time he woke up, shining down stingingly from a completely clear expanse of blue. Birds chirped back and forth, but something wasn't right about their song, it sounded…different. He didn't understand how he could tell, but they sounded nervous.
His head was ringing as if some sort of alarm was sounding within, and he felt like he had slept in a terrible position, but he was able to ease himself into a sitting position, his green eyes scanning the area as his neck protested painfully to even the slightest movement.
He was in an odd grove, barely wide enough to turn donuts in a car, a piece of forest completely surrounded by dry vegetation and majestic oaks, and strange, bluish trees built about the same way. The ground was carpeted generously with soft and perfectly healthy grass, uniform enough to appear regularly mowed. No more than ten feet away stood an old stone well with a bucket, oddly out of place in the middle of such a place.
The boy stood slowly, becoming dizzy, but making it to his feet without too much difficulty. He wore no shoes, but the grass was warm from the heat of the sun and soft as silk; it felt absolutely heavenly against his bare soles. He slunk over to the well and leaned on its edge, looking down into the water hidden beneath the earth. Where the hell am I?
As if to answer, the water began to boil and froth viciously. He stepped back in fright. There was a giant spout of water, knocking him onto his back in disbelief. A tiny creature emerged from the temporary mist, appearing made of the water that birthed it. It was shaped a bit like a sea horse and was about as tall as a boot. It was friendly looking, but the boy couldn't help but impulsively demand, "What are you?!" as he stared with his mouth wide open.
"I don't know, who are you?" the creature chirped in retort, apparently remaining aloft above the ground by the power of two silvery, but far too small, wings.
He tried to say his name, but he couldn't unlodge it from the tip of his tongue, couldn't quite remember. He put a finger on his lower lip and stared at the ground between his legs, struggling to find an answer, his nose wrinkled like a scientist in deep thought. He gave up after a few moments in hopelessness, "I…I…don't know."
The creature tilted its head to the side in interest. "Really? I'm not supposed to know mine, but if you don't know your's either, that's actually a great thing!"
He looked up, perplexed, question clear across his features, his expression demanding elaboration.
The odd seahorse entity tilted its head to the other side. "It means there are plans for you, more specific than for the rest."
"Wait, wait," The boy started, "you know more than I do, what's going on?"
The creature's voice changed a little bit, to a mixture of solemnity and reverence. "The worlds were becoming crowded, the people lost sympathy for them, began destroying them. The cycle ended, the time to start anew has begun."
The sun was right at the top of the sky by the time he woke up, shining down stingingly from a completely clear expanse of blue. Birds chirped back and forth, but something wasn't right about their song, it sounded…different. He didn't understand how he could tell, but they sounded nervous.
His head was ringing as if some sort of alarm was sounding within, and he felt like he had slept in a terrible position, but he was able to ease himself into a sitting position, his green eyes scanning the area as his neck protested painfully to even the slightest movement.
He was in an odd grove, barely wide enough to turn donuts in a car, a piece of forest completely surrounded by dry vegetation and majestic oaks, and strange, bluish trees built about the same way. The ground was carpeted generously with soft and perfectly healthy grass, uniform enough to appear regularly mowed. No more than ten feet away stood an old stone well with a bucket, oddly out of place in the middle of such a place.
The boy stood slowly, becoming dizzy, but making it to his feet without too much difficulty. He wore no shoes, but the grass was warm from the heat of the sun and soft as silk; it felt absolutely heavenly against his bare soles. He slunk over to the well and leaned on its edge, looking down into the water hidden beneath the earth. Where the hell am I?
As if to answer, the water began to boil and froth viciously. He stepped back in fright. There was a giant spout of water, knocking him onto his back in disbelief. A tiny creature emerged from the temporary mist, appearing made of the water that birthed it. It was shaped a bit like a sea horse and was about as tall as a boot. It was friendly looking, but the boy couldn't help but impulsively demand, "What are you?!" as he stared with his mouth wide open.
"I don't know, who are you?" the creature chirped in retort, apparently remaining aloft above the ground by the power of two silvery, but far too small, wings.
He tried to say his name, but he couldn't unlodge it from the tip of his tongue, couldn't quite remember. He put a finger on his lower lip and stared at the ground between his legs, struggling to find an answer, his nose wrinkled like a scientist in deep thought. He gave up after a few moments in hopelessness, "I…I…don't know."
The creature tilted its head to the side in interest. "Really? I'm not supposed to know mine, but if you don't know your's either, that's actually a great thing!"
He looked up, perplexed, question clear across his features, his expression demanding elaboration.
The odd seahorse entity tilted its head to the other side. "It means there are plans for you, more specific than for the rest."
"Wait, wait," The boy started, "you know more than I do, what's going on?"
The creature's voice changed a little bit, to a mixture of solemnity and reverence. "The worlds were becoming crowded, the people lost sympathy for them, began destroying them. The cycle ended, the time to start anew has begun."