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I've been trying to come up with a book description for Kindle and an eventual back cover blurb for the paperback, for the novel I'm currently revising.
There are a lot of characters including more than one villain, one of whom 'works' for the main one but has his own agenda, so I've tried to keep it to the absolute essentials to avoid too many names in case some of this sounds too general. Also in light of the need to keep things short, its 166 words.
Here goes:
Raised as a servant in his father’s household, Faradon is denied his birthright. Now, at the age of nineteen, even his life is threatened by his elder brother. His only hope of escape is to adopt the perilous existence of a mercenary. But his innate sense of justice embroils him in the affairs of a young thief, Nat, and both are outlawed, reliant on the help of Tara, a travelling warrior woman.
As storm clouds gather and an ancient menace from the stars moves against Faradon’s homeland, he and his newfound friends must find a legendary sword and use it to defeat the enemy. Arrayed against them is an army of mutated humans and ferocious hounds, backed by dark forces. Even with the help of a small feisty dragon called Wendos, a race of warriors known as Elves, and an alien woman with strange powers, it will take every scrap of courage and intelligence Faradon possesses to overcome treachery and to claim his destiny.
There are a lot of characters including more than one villain, one of whom 'works' for the main one but has his own agenda, so I've tried to keep it to the absolute essentials to avoid too many names in case some of this sounds too general. Also in light of the need to keep things short, its 166 words.
Here goes:
Raised as a servant in his father’s household, Faradon is denied his birthright. Now, at the age of nineteen, even his life is threatened by his elder brother. His only hope of escape is to adopt the perilous existence of a mercenary. But his innate sense of justice embroils him in the affairs of a young thief, Nat, and both are outlawed, reliant on the help of Tara, a travelling warrior woman.
As storm clouds gather and an ancient menace from the stars moves against Faradon’s homeland, he and his newfound friends must find a legendary sword and use it to defeat the enemy. Arrayed against them is an army of mutated humans and ferocious hounds, backed by dark forces. Even with the help of a small feisty dragon called Wendos, a race of warriors known as Elves, and an alien woman with strange powers, it will take every scrap of courage and intelligence Faradon possesses to overcome treachery and to claim his destiny.