ctg
weaver of the unseen
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The difference between this and the first one is that the first one had more emotion when this read very plant. So I beg you step into letter writer shoes and forget for a moment that you're a novelist. Can you find the emotion, the fear, the feelings and the memories that might have gone through his/hers head at the moment of writing? And can you convey them?