J Riff
The Ants are my friends..
Thick n the Dead- another swell title. It's late, but the beginning of a story is very important soooo.....
Some people in this world were meant to do great things. These are the people who conquered the world, ( greatly)advanced the fields of art and science, and inspired greatness within us( - )and who were the basis of research projects by fifth grade classes around the world. Our story is not about those people. < like it better with the pythonesque one-liner here rather than on it's own line.
Our story is the tale of Bob Guy, a (blonde-haired, blue-eyed young) American of (medium height and a sun-kissed complexion). Bob was (extraordinary), not because he had (exceptional intelligence or exceptional strength), but rather because of a lack thereof.
a bit too descriptive ? sun-kissed like an orange.
When war broke out four years ago, Bob was conscripted into the fascist “Blue” army, his mediocrity and (expendable nature....)disposable disposition making him the perfect candidate for extended military testing.
Yea, me too. )
Some people in this world were meant to do great things. These are the people who conquered the world, ( greatly)advanced the fields of art and science, and inspired greatness within us( - )and who were the basis of research projects by fifth grade classes around the world. Our story is not about those people. < like it better with the pythonesque one-liner here rather than on it's own line.
Our story is the tale of Bob Guy, a (blonde-haired, blue-eyed young) American of (medium height and a sun-kissed complexion). Bob was (extraordinary), not because he had (exceptional intelligence or exceptional strength), but rather because of a lack thereof.
a bit too descriptive ? sun-kissed like an orange.
When war broke out four years ago, Bob was conscripted into the fascist “Blue” army, his mediocrity and (expendable nature....)disposable disposition making him the perfect candidate for extended military testing.
Yea, me too. )