Fun Haiku

shandril

this is just too tempting
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haiku is japenese poetry consisting of 3
lines
the first line has to have 5 syllables in it
i'll give you an example:

sleep is el-u-sive

second line has to have 7 syllables in it
ie:

my mind starts to wan-der away

and 5 for the last line :

pray-ing for re-lease

now haiku can be about anything or nothing the only person it has to have meaning for is the person writing it as long as it has 17 syllables

have fun and enjoy your selves:D

try it even if you dont think you can do it .......use your fingers to count the syllables i do;)
 

Quokka

wandering
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Mar 26, 2005
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When writing Haikus

syllable counting is hard

Maybe it's just me.
 

shandril

this is just too tempting
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Location
NSW - Australia
noisey is the boy
"MUMMY" is yelled loud at me
give me a break please

blue petals open
sweet is its fragrence heady
that's the blue moon rose
 
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