Wayne Mack
Well-Known Member
I tend to use common place sounds and find two different scenarios. If the sound has no shock or surprise value to the PoV, I just incorporate it in regular text as part of a full sentence,
If, though, the sound is a surprise to the PoV, I italicize it and place it on its own line, often sans punctuation,
My logic is that the unattributed noise will cause the reader to wonder, "Where did that come from?" and echo the feeling from the PoV.
"The microwave dinged."
If, though, the sound is a surprise to the PoV, I italicize it and place it on its own line, often sans punctuation,
Bang
My logic is that the unattributed noise will cause the reader to wonder, "Where did that come from?" and echo the feeling from the PoV.