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Watching you from upside down
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Hi all. I've been out of writing for a little while for various personal reason, but I'm trying to get back in the saddle again. This is the start of what feels like a short story length piece. I'd love to get your input on it. Thanks!
“That was delicious,” said Nicciah as everyone congratulated the quartet. No one thought it an odd complement from her, the villagers were used to the wise woman’s eccentricities. A twig itched under her shirt, new growth that had broken through her waxy skin, spurred by the music. She would shrink it later.
With the harvest in, everyone was ready for a party that night. Niccah congratulated Josie and Aman more personally, Josie’s viol playing had been particularly spirited and Aman’s gamba was solid, if uninspired. She had shrunken the feet of the two women herself before they were fully grown, a task she hated, but preferred to the thought of children with broken, bound feet. The other two musicians’ names were a blank to her, but she smiled at them anyway.
Nicciah directed a couple of the young men, Benny for whom she’d once fixed a broken arm and another strong young thing, to leave the barrel of strong, herb flavoured beer by the head table. Then she was done for the night, leaving the festivities for those who wanted them.
Her cottage was a little way out of the main village, past an old oak that generations of children had swung from. There was one there now, sitting still on the swing, staring silently at nothing. She could see the bruises on his arm; big, finger-shaped discolourations. With her eyes that saw more than skin-deep she could see other hurts too, she knew how this boy’s story went.
“I can’t help you,” she told the boy sadly. “But if you like, I could make you a candle. You wouldn’t be scared anymore.” The boy nodded, so she pulled a tiny candle-stub out of her pocket and lit it. She knew she shouldn’t get involved, that it never changed anything in the longer term, but found herself doing so anyway. Perhaps she had been in one place long enough, Nicciah thought, overlooked foot binding, beatings and worse just a few times too many.
“What’s your name, boy?” She asked.
“Ashley,” he answered, quietly.
“The wax might hurt at first,” she said, but she dripped it onto his thick hair so that it would burn him the least she could. Then with smooth, practiced movements she smoothed the wax out and down, the boy shrinking under her hands as she went. There was a commotion elsewhere, but she ignored it, so when Ashley’s mother arrived, sobbing, there was only a sapling with bone-white bark that Nicciah had planted in the centre of the path to her cottage. That, and a fresh candle in her pocket.
“Turn him back!” The mother shrieked. She was better at hiding the bruises than Ashley had been, but Nicciah could see her deeper hurts clearly. She was sorry to have added to them.
“I can’t.” She held out her still lit candle to Ashe’s mother. “But I could take your troubles away too, if I make you a candle.” The woman hesitated, then nodded.
“Plant me next to him.”
Nicciah dripped the wax into her hair too, and started to smooth, shrinking the mother. By now there was a crowd, staring and murmuring, but she focused on her task. The more fool her, because she didn’t see Ashe’s father until he was nearly on her.
“Waxwitch!” He shouted, and she could see the oncoming violence and anger, the jealousy that she would take something from him. In a moment he knocked her to the ground. Then there was only shouting and stamping. She tried to curl up, but her wax and branches broke under the feet. They left her there, taking the mother with them. They even took the Ashley-candle from her pocket. All Nicciah could do was lie in the dirt, a broken bundle of pain held together by clothes.
She could see the way back to the village, and Ashley’s tree. Someone had stepped on it, or kicked it. The thin stem was snapped almost in two, and lay at an angle on the ground, attached only by a thin, twisted piece of bark.
A crow came by, in the twilight. It pecked at her inquisitively, but didn’t like the taste of wax and wood, so it left. After dark, something else snuffled around behind her, but she couldn’t turn to see what it was. Part of her wanted to shout at it, to either go away or eat her, but her broken body couldn’t find the breath. Another part wondered if this was how she would finally die, ignorant boots and unseen teeth. It wasn’t a good death.
Then, with a louder huff, the animal left. Nicciah could see a candle flame coming towards her from the village. As it came closer she thought it was carried by a little girl, but then the small figure stopped and squatted in front of Nicciah’s face, and the candlelight illuminated Ashley’s mother. She looked no more than seven years old, and her hair was still thick with wax.
“Are you still alive, aunty?” The mother-child asked, staring into her face. Nicciah blinked for her, painfully, and the girl tipped the candle, dripping wax into the cracks and pushing Nicciah’s limbs back together until the old witch could move herself again. They fixed her breaks as best they could until the candle, Ashley’s candle, was half gone, then Nicciah stopped her.
“If I’m to finish making your candle before I go we will need to use much of the rest of this.”
“No thank you, aunty,” said the child-mother, “Let me come with you. I want to grow again, I want to do better, to be stronger.”
Nicciah hummed.
“What happened isn’t your fault.”
The girl squared her shoulders.
“Even so.”
“They will call you a witch if you come with me.”
“Let them.”
Nicciah paused and thought.
“I’ll need more wax. Wait here.” She took the candle and left the girl sitting by the new tree in the old path, and limped into the village. Her legs were different lengths, something was grinding painfully inside her torso, and broken twigs stood out from her skin like thorns, but she moved anyway.
She didn’t remember his name, but she knew where Ashley’s father’s cottage was, and she went there now, pooling wax into her palm where it stayed hot and liquid.
As she pushed the door open to the single room inside, she saw him wake and leap out of bed. She threw the wax in his eyes, blinding him, then pushed it roughly as he cried out, smoothing his face so that the screams stopped. She put more wax on his big, hurtful fists as he flailed for her, and pushed some more. This was no gentle smoothing, and she pushed hard at the wax until she was left with a fat, misshapen candle, and a rough-barked, twisted little tree that she left on the bed with its roots in the air.
When she emerged, a couple of neighbours had woken to the commotion and come out to see what was happening. Nicciah ignored them, limping back to Ashley’s tree and the girl. She still had a stub of Ashley’s candle, and she used a drop to fix the break in the sapling’s narrow trunk. It was the wrong season for planting, but the tree had a good chance of surviving the winter, and would doubtless be fine after that. She pushed the last of the wax into her leg to even out her gait a little, then held her hand out to help the girl stand.
“What’s your name?”
“Leah.”
“Come on then Leah, let’s go.”
She wouldn’t grow normally of course, but if Nicciah could get enough wax, and teach her to find the tree inside her, the girl could eventually grow to be a woman again. As she had.
“That was delicious,” said Nicciah as everyone congratulated the quartet. No one thought it an odd complement from her, the villagers were used to the wise woman’s eccentricities. A twig itched under her shirt, new growth that had broken through her waxy skin, spurred by the music. She would shrink it later.
With the harvest in, everyone was ready for a party that night. Niccah congratulated Josie and Aman more personally, Josie’s viol playing had been particularly spirited and Aman’s gamba was solid, if uninspired. She had shrunken the feet of the two women herself before they were fully grown, a task she hated, but preferred to the thought of children with broken, bound feet. The other two musicians’ names were a blank to her, but she smiled at them anyway.
Nicciah directed a couple of the young men, Benny for whom she’d once fixed a broken arm and another strong young thing, to leave the barrel of strong, herb flavoured beer by the head table. Then she was done for the night, leaving the festivities for those who wanted them.
Her cottage was a little way out of the main village, past an old oak that generations of children had swung from. There was one there now, sitting still on the swing, staring silently at nothing. She could see the bruises on his arm; big, finger-shaped discolourations. With her eyes that saw more than skin-deep she could see other hurts too, she knew how this boy’s story went.
“I can’t help you,” she told the boy sadly. “But if you like, I could make you a candle. You wouldn’t be scared anymore.” The boy nodded, so she pulled a tiny candle-stub out of her pocket and lit it. She knew she shouldn’t get involved, that it never changed anything in the longer term, but found herself doing so anyway. Perhaps she had been in one place long enough, Nicciah thought, overlooked foot binding, beatings and worse just a few times too many.
“What’s your name, boy?” She asked.
“Ashley,” he answered, quietly.
“The wax might hurt at first,” she said, but she dripped it onto his thick hair so that it would burn him the least she could. Then with smooth, practiced movements she smoothed the wax out and down, the boy shrinking under her hands as she went. There was a commotion elsewhere, but she ignored it, so when Ashley’s mother arrived, sobbing, there was only a sapling with bone-white bark that Nicciah had planted in the centre of the path to her cottage. That, and a fresh candle in her pocket.
“Turn him back!” The mother shrieked. She was better at hiding the bruises than Ashley had been, but Nicciah could see her deeper hurts clearly. She was sorry to have added to them.
“I can’t.” She held out her still lit candle to Ashe’s mother. “But I could take your troubles away too, if I make you a candle.” The woman hesitated, then nodded.
“Plant me next to him.”
Nicciah dripped the wax into her hair too, and started to smooth, shrinking the mother. By now there was a crowd, staring and murmuring, but she focused on her task. The more fool her, because she didn’t see Ashe’s father until he was nearly on her.
“Waxwitch!” He shouted, and she could see the oncoming violence and anger, the jealousy that she would take something from him. In a moment he knocked her to the ground. Then there was only shouting and stamping. She tried to curl up, but her wax and branches broke under the feet. They left her there, taking the mother with them. They even took the Ashley-candle from her pocket. All Nicciah could do was lie in the dirt, a broken bundle of pain held together by clothes.
She could see the way back to the village, and Ashley’s tree. Someone had stepped on it, or kicked it. The thin stem was snapped almost in two, and lay at an angle on the ground, attached only by a thin, twisted piece of bark.
A crow came by, in the twilight. It pecked at her inquisitively, but didn’t like the taste of wax and wood, so it left. After dark, something else snuffled around behind her, but she couldn’t turn to see what it was. Part of her wanted to shout at it, to either go away or eat her, but her broken body couldn’t find the breath. Another part wondered if this was how she would finally die, ignorant boots and unseen teeth. It wasn’t a good death.
Then, with a louder huff, the animal left. Nicciah could see a candle flame coming towards her from the village. As it came closer she thought it was carried by a little girl, but then the small figure stopped and squatted in front of Nicciah’s face, and the candlelight illuminated Ashley’s mother. She looked no more than seven years old, and her hair was still thick with wax.
“Are you still alive, aunty?” The mother-child asked, staring into her face. Nicciah blinked for her, painfully, and the girl tipped the candle, dripping wax into the cracks and pushing Nicciah’s limbs back together until the old witch could move herself again. They fixed her breaks as best they could until the candle, Ashley’s candle, was half gone, then Nicciah stopped her.
“If I’m to finish making your candle before I go we will need to use much of the rest of this.”
“No thank you, aunty,” said the child-mother, “Let me come with you. I want to grow again, I want to do better, to be stronger.”
Nicciah hummed.
“What happened isn’t your fault.”
The girl squared her shoulders.
“Even so.”
“They will call you a witch if you come with me.”
“Let them.”
Nicciah paused and thought.
“I’ll need more wax. Wait here.” She took the candle and left the girl sitting by the new tree in the old path, and limped into the village. Her legs were different lengths, something was grinding painfully inside her torso, and broken twigs stood out from her skin like thorns, but she moved anyway.
She didn’t remember his name, but she knew where Ashley’s father’s cottage was, and she went there now, pooling wax into her palm where it stayed hot and liquid.
As she pushed the door open to the single room inside, she saw him wake and leap out of bed. She threw the wax in his eyes, blinding him, then pushed it roughly as he cried out, smoothing his face so that the screams stopped. She put more wax on his big, hurtful fists as he flailed for her, and pushed some more. This was no gentle smoothing, and she pushed hard at the wax until she was left with a fat, misshapen candle, and a rough-barked, twisted little tree that she left on the bed with its roots in the air.
When she emerged, a couple of neighbours had woken to the commotion and come out to see what was happening. Nicciah ignored them, limping back to Ashley’s tree and the girl. She still had a stub of Ashley’s candle, and she used a drop to fix the break in the sapling’s narrow trunk. It was the wrong season for planting, but the tree had a good chance of surviving the winter, and would doubtless be fine after that. She pushed the last of the wax into her leg to even out her gait a little, then held her hand out to help the girl stand.
“What’s your name?”
“Leah.”
“Come on then Leah, let’s go.”
She wouldn’t grow normally of course, but if Nicciah could get enough wax, and teach her to find the tree inside her, the girl could eventually grow to be a woman again. As she had.