“Hello, muse?” “Please hold…” *elevator music*
- Dec 23, 2020
- SW WY
I have to be honest that I read it a complete of times and I didn't understand it. I've read it again now a couple of times and still don't. It's well written and I love the word 'transcombobulated'.
The idea is young neighborhood kids thinking the elderly neighbor is an old grouch, and the elderly neighbor thinking the young kids are punks, and each finding out their perspective on the matter is incorrect. I also attempted to use each as the POV to play a bit more on the theme.