tinkerdan
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First I always thought of Close Third to be like the narrator is standing on the shoulder of the character.
Meaning, not the character, just seeing things from their perspective.
So I think it goes back to what is mentioned several times...how does snake fit into the universe and how it might be able to slither past without notice.
I do like the notion of serpentine.
Though one does have to consider the integrity of the world you are building...
A writer also has to consider the reader and if he is comparing something to something elephant size then there might need to be a mention of an animal in the story that meets that height and weight requirement.
Then when you say--they were ignoring the(insert your animals name)in the room--the reader immediately makes that connection.
Although the above might also be a way of introducing the animal since(if we can trust the reader knows it should be elephant in the room)they can easily make the connection just from the familiarity of the phrase.
The hard and creative way would be to insert the attributes of a snake into the description so that there is a likelihood the reader will think snake..
Without any evident appendages; it slithered across the ground, a smooth sidling wave of hide with a gaping maw and prominent threatening fangs.
Meaning, not the character, just seeing things from their perspective.
So I think it goes back to what is mentioned several times...how does snake fit into the universe and how it might be able to slither past without notice.
I do like the notion of serpentine.
Though one does have to consider the integrity of the world you are building...
A writer also has to consider the reader and if he is comparing something to something elephant size then there might need to be a mention of an animal in the story that meets that height and weight requirement.
Then when you say--they were ignoring the(insert your animals name)in the room--the reader immediately makes that connection.
Although the above might also be a way of introducing the animal since(if we can trust the reader knows it should be elephant in the room)they can easily make the connection just from the familiarity of the phrase.
The hard and creative way would be to insert the attributes of a snake into the description so that there is a likelihood the reader will think snake..
Without any evident appendages; it slithered across the ground, a smooth sidling wave of hide with a gaping maw and prominent threatening fangs.