- Aug 7, 2007
So the first version is using the character's voice and the second is how you, as the author, would have written it without taking any account of that voice...?Professor Tweed studied the tree. It was a splendid example of the Douglas Fir, Pseudotsuga menziesii, which he estimated at ninety metres tall.
Jack gawped up at the tree. It was one of those with needles not leaves, and it was holy sh*t as tall as Godzilla or something.