Tooninoot Seasons One and Two - Amazon KDP

Karn's Return

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Only $1 U.S. for each season, Seasons One and Two available. Season three in the midst of work.



Any constructive critiques and feedback appreciated and welcome. :)
 

Karn's Return

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Teresa Edgerton

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The book description doesn't draw me in, since it really tells me nothing distinctive about the main character or the story. What you have written there on the Amazon page could describe at least a dozen other SFF novels (some good, some bad) that I have read, and makes me wonder why I would want to read another in the same vein . . . in particular, why would I want to read this one? It needs a hook, Karn. I assume the story has one, so tell us about it on the Amazon page and you might attract more readers.
 
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