Nothing left but cOkroaches

logan_run

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Nothing left but the cokroachs

The smallspace vesle slowly but surely landed on the plamets surface..

It was a two man ship but the piolet fot eh ship was a female..her name was efesella.the other passenger of the ship was esw.
they walked across the desrt terran of the newly discovered planet for soem time. then close tot he planets ocean. they found a anceint staue.the must of exterminated themselvess the male astronaught said..

the staue had a arm hoding a candle around its head was acrown the statue although barely intact looked like it was hit bya powerfullweapon or storm appeared female..
 

chrispenycate

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I would definitely recommend use of a spell checker when you're going through your writing - there are a lot of typos in that piece which makes it harder to read.
I avoided red-penning it, assuming that such a density of faults was a deliberate decision rather than an error. We are not constrained asthe common mortals are to mediocre law-abidement :D.
 

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