I have this para in my WiP which I stumble across every time, but when I read it a second time realise it does make sense. Obviously it needs to be worded better but at the moment I can't think how.
As the teens were making towards the lake, and seemed to know what they were doing, he presumed they had some sort of intel he wasn't privy to and so didn't question them when they crouched beside the reeds and looked towards the water.
Urgh. Help?
(Teenagers walking towards a lake looking like they know what they're doing so POV character doesn't question them).
As the teens were making towards the lake, and seemed to know what they were doing, he presumed they had some sort of intel he wasn't privy to and so didn't question them when they crouched beside the reeds and looked towards the water.
Urgh. Help?
(Teenagers walking towards a lake looking like they know what they're doing so POV character doesn't question them).