Vladd67
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Ok this is a rough opening to a story I have been thinking about, and have decided to bite the bullet and attempt to put my idea into words.
Between a Rock...
The crowd outside the house was what first drew his attention. Peter's daily ritual of a quiet late night stroll around the village before bed had been disturbed by this gathering, what was going on? It was only then he saw the Police car, not so much parked, as arrogantly abandoned across the driveway, its flashing blue lights demanding attention from the world. Even though it was a small village with little to entertain the masses, Peter knew something serious must have happened to keep so many people entranced here on this icy night.
A single uniformed constable was doing his best to disperse the crowd and to keep warm but seemed to be failing on both counts. The constable was trying but failing miserably with the “nothing to see,” and “move along home,” routine with the rubberneckers as Peter bitterly still thought of them, but the crowd were having none of it, and it seemed mindlessly pressed forward in the hope of spotting any gory details. A feeling of pity for the PC fluttered briefly through Peter's mind but didn't linger. Memories of so many, many, similar scenes filled his head as he approached, none of them, not that anyone ever bothered to ask, were ever pretty.
Word of the crime, as this could only be a crime, a mere accident would never attract such attention Peter thought, seemed to have spread across the village as more people arrived, every now and then a flash of light betrayed an attempt to photograph the scene, but Peter doubted anything juicy would be finding its way onto someone’s mobile phone. How many tweets would this scene create he wondered? How many facebook updates would there be? The ghoulish appetite for suffering enjoyed by the average person never failed to turn Peter's stomach.
Now the circus was really starting to arrive, first the scene of crime van arrived, forcing its way through the crowd which was now blocking the road. Was the entire village here tonight revelling in this neighbours suffering? Peter felt his stomach turn in disgust. Next to arrive was an unmarked car carrying the detectives, at least they were just policemen and not them, at least they weren't here, it couldn't be that bad then.
At the front door of the house the technicians could be seen struggling into their white scene of crime suits with the little booties and hoods that Peter had always hated, thinking that they looked like an oversized baby grow. Memories of the white cotton suit he wore at scenes like this being defiled with blood and gore hit Peter with practically a physical reaction, he could almost smell the blood, taste it in the air, but no tonight was not like that night, he never had to see sights like that ever again, not until he went to sleep and began to dream that is, then it all came back to him. An ambulance arrived next with little fanfare, the paramedics getting out of their vehicle with no sign of urgency, a palpable hush enveloped the watching throng as people realised what this meant. Somebody was not just having a bad night, no, somebody was dead.
With a mental shrug of his shoulders the Peter decided to head home, this was nothing he hadn't seen before, in fact it was probably nothing compared to what he had seen before. Just a sordid entertainment for the masses, something juicy to talk about tomorrow instead of the latest reality show on TV. Then Peter realised it was more than that, a chill passed through his body that had nothing to do with the temperature. That Range Rover parked across the road with the tinted glass, how many times had it brought him to scenes like this? Obviously they were here, already in the house, idly Peter wondered if it was anyone he knew, he felt no inclination to find out, he wasn't going to stop and say hello. If they were here then this was no mere murder, and he wasn't going to get involved, not again, not any more, Hunching up inside his coat as if trying to keep warm, whilst actually hiding his face he hurried home, walking as fast as he dare, fighting the urge to run, leaving the crime scene, leaving the death, leaving the blood, futilely trying to leave his past behind him.
Between a Rock...
The crowd outside the house was what first drew his attention. Peter's daily ritual of a quiet late night stroll around the village before bed had been disturbed by this gathering, what was going on? It was only then he saw the Police car, not so much parked, as arrogantly abandoned across the driveway, its flashing blue lights demanding attention from the world. Even though it was a small village with little to entertain the masses, Peter knew something serious must have happened to keep so many people entranced here on this icy night.
A single uniformed constable was doing his best to disperse the crowd and to keep warm but seemed to be failing on both counts. The constable was trying but failing miserably with the “nothing to see,” and “move along home,” routine with the rubberneckers as Peter bitterly still thought of them, but the crowd were having none of it, and it seemed mindlessly pressed forward in the hope of spotting any gory details. A feeling of pity for the PC fluttered briefly through Peter's mind but didn't linger. Memories of so many, many, similar scenes filled his head as he approached, none of them, not that anyone ever bothered to ask, were ever pretty.
Word of the crime, as this could only be a crime, a mere accident would never attract such attention Peter thought, seemed to have spread across the village as more people arrived, every now and then a flash of light betrayed an attempt to photograph the scene, but Peter doubted anything juicy would be finding its way onto someone’s mobile phone. How many tweets would this scene create he wondered? How many facebook updates would there be? The ghoulish appetite for suffering enjoyed by the average person never failed to turn Peter's stomach.
Now the circus was really starting to arrive, first the scene of crime van arrived, forcing its way through the crowd which was now blocking the road. Was the entire village here tonight revelling in this neighbours suffering? Peter felt his stomach turn in disgust. Next to arrive was an unmarked car carrying the detectives, at least they were just policemen and not them, at least they weren't here, it couldn't be that bad then.
At the front door of the house the technicians could be seen struggling into their white scene of crime suits with the little booties and hoods that Peter had always hated, thinking that they looked like an oversized baby grow. Memories of the white cotton suit he wore at scenes like this being defiled with blood and gore hit Peter with practically a physical reaction, he could almost smell the blood, taste it in the air, but no tonight was not like that night, he never had to see sights like that ever again, not until he went to sleep and began to dream that is, then it all came back to him. An ambulance arrived next with little fanfare, the paramedics getting out of their vehicle with no sign of urgency, a palpable hush enveloped the watching throng as people realised what this meant. Somebody was not just having a bad night, no, somebody was dead.
With a mental shrug of his shoulders the Peter decided to head home, this was nothing he hadn't seen before, in fact it was probably nothing compared to what he had seen before. Just a sordid entertainment for the masses, something juicy to talk about tomorrow instead of the latest reality show on TV. Then Peter realised it was more than that, a chill passed through his body that had nothing to do with the temperature. That Range Rover parked across the road with the tinted glass, how many times had it brought him to scenes like this? Obviously they were here, already in the house, idly Peter wondered if it was anyone he knew, he felt no inclination to find out, he wasn't going to stop and say hello. If they were here then this was no mere murder, and he wasn't going to get involved, not again, not any more, Hunching up inside his coat as if trying to keep warm, whilst actually hiding his face he hurried home, walking as fast as he dare, fighting the urge to run, leaving the crime scene, leaving the death, leaving the blood, futilely trying to leave his past behind him.