well here I am again with some issues in my book on how to proceed. I am looking for some ideas or help on moving forward. Just writing out my issue sometimes helps, so here goes:
So my character is on a space station with some family, all happy and everything is great. The station suddenly gets hit hard and he escapes via a pod, but some of his family gets split up. There are also a lot of prisoners on the station that coincidently escape at the same time and also escape with the pods.
What happens next is where I am stuck. I need the prisoners to organize and take over the area where they all land. They suddenly become the main next part of the book. (although they had nothing to do with the stations destruction). I need this to happen fast.
At the same time I wanted to pause for a second and let the main character sort of grieve over the fact that some family may not have made it out alive. He's a teenager and it would only make sense to let him land and first try and contact the rest of his family, then sort of sit in a corner on the world below somewhere with himself and take in everything that just happen. Nothing like this has ever happened to him before.
But somehow while he is sitting there sad and barely aware of the world around him, I need someone to alert him that the city is being taken over by the prisoners that escaped... In my head I try to see this and it seems unrealistic. He probably wouldn't take in a word that would be said.
Time would have to pass. People don't take over that quickly. I have thankfully never been in a warzone so I am also unsure what its like.
He also wouldn't have time to sit around, he would need to move! I feel im jumping from one scene that was major straight into another one and not letting my character or the readers breathe.
So my idea to fix this would be to have his pod crash and he blacks out for a day or two and wakes up in someones house who tells him the city has been overthrown and they are in hiding. Now he has all the time in the world to think about what happened and decide his next move.
But im wondering if there is a better way to deal with this. How do others deal with a major sad moment in their story that needs to get followed up by more drama.
So my character is on a space station with some family, all happy and everything is great. The station suddenly gets hit hard and he escapes via a pod, but some of his family gets split up. There are also a lot of prisoners on the station that coincidently escape at the same time and also escape with the pods.
What happens next is where I am stuck. I need the prisoners to organize and take over the area where they all land. They suddenly become the main next part of the book. (although they had nothing to do with the stations destruction). I need this to happen fast.
At the same time I wanted to pause for a second and let the main character sort of grieve over the fact that some family may not have made it out alive. He's a teenager and it would only make sense to let him land and first try and contact the rest of his family, then sort of sit in a corner on the world below somewhere with himself and take in everything that just happen. Nothing like this has ever happened to him before.
But somehow while he is sitting there sad and barely aware of the world around him, I need someone to alert him that the city is being taken over by the prisoners that escaped... In my head I try to see this and it seems unrealistic. He probably wouldn't take in a word that would be said.
Time would have to pass. People don't take over that quickly. I have thankfully never been in a warzone so I am also unsure what its like.
He also wouldn't have time to sit around, he would need to move! I feel im jumping from one scene that was major straight into another one and not letting my character or the readers breathe.
So my idea to fix this would be to have his pod crash and he blacks out for a day or two and wakes up in someones house who tells him the city has been overthrown and they are in hiding. Now he has all the time in the world to think about what happened and decide his next move.
But im wondering if there is a better way to deal with this. How do others deal with a major sad moment in their story that needs to get followed up by more drama.