I saw the phantom menace bitty bits, but to me it smacks of Galafrey falling, much much more. Is that why your basis is in the States?
You might have had a nice steam punky thing going with a Queens Privy Council messenger type thing.. Steam punk time traveling double o seven. .. Just thinking it through, though, not criticising.
Okay, let's have at it.
Temporal Continental Congress. .. Directly segues into the American government by its reference to the original political system.
Or even more specificly tailored;
The two thousandth Session of the Temporal Continental Congress of the United States of America opened in chaos. A tacked on supposedly innocuous sub bill that had quietly slipped through with the last house budget was now showing its teeth. And tearing through great bites of space and time. Revisioning the young marriages clause, history had been shattered. And for what? That soon to be fourteen millionairess Julie could time wed her affianced century's old beau? Temporally Thirty year old Henry has been the mastermind behind a new nanotechnology that has gone literally viral. And its making shockwaves through the big three corporations that Julie and Henry represent two of. What has this love cartel really in its sights? These two arent saying, but Julie's famed Children's Crusade for Independence is right at the heart of it, though.
The government is helpless and as time crumbles around the two unrepentant love revisionists it will take a mastermind to unravel these two's history hidden master plan. There is only one man immutable to time change that could help. That can resew the split seams of reality. And the Secret Order of the Knights of the Clockmaker, the Temporal Consortium, is going to make Dorian Black do just that... Before all Time breaks loose.
You see the form? This is just a lot of thrown together bloggity jibber. You will have to insert your own bits. But the idea is to hit them with a problem / threat/ consequence / danger pro forma, more or less.
Amp the tension up. And make it all sound world shatterly heroic.