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I've just reached a point in my current work in progress and I've found another little chestnut.
The group of teenage kids are out exploring and have found an old ruin.
They know nothing about it but...
The whole story is told by one of the kids at a later date, so he will have knowledge of what the place is, how it ended up as it did.
I think as it stands I'd like the reader to know the background of the place, but there is no easy way to insert it into the flow of the story, but the narrator could do it as an aside:
Of course we did not know anything at the time, but I later discovered.....
Is this appropriate, or would it disrupt the flow of the main story, the kids exploring and finding the mysterious ruins?
The group of teenage kids are out exploring and have found an old ruin.
They know nothing about it but...
The whole story is told by one of the kids at a later date, so he will have knowledge of what the place is, how it ended up as it did.
I think as it stands I'd like the reader to know the background of the place, but there is no easy way to insert it into the flow of the story, but the narrator could do it as an aside:
Of course we did not know anything at the time, but I later discovered.....
Is this appropriate, or would it disrupt the flow of the main story, the kids exploring and finding the mysterious ruins?