Today Ian needs to punch his twin brother Andrew who he's not seen for fifty years. I'm trying to portray the fact they are identical twins without actually coming right out and saying it but I may need to.
Lots of interesting stuff going on!
Middle Grade. (I test drove an MG Midget once, but couldn't work the sports-gears!)
If you need a beta...
Ta! And I'm always interested in misanthropic rants. I did actually start a separate blog so I could do that sort of thing myself, but I did one post about litter and recycling lorries and it made me too angry to continue.
What about implying it was like looking into a mirror or since its been 50 years..a funhouse mirror because Im sure they are different weights?
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