Black As Night -- Opening Scenes (900 words)

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Thank you, both.

Plenty to think about there, Percival, not least how to prevent people misunderstanding the logistics of the scene/layout.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it, hopewrites. Yes, I was deliberately going for that emotionless-because-of-trauma bit, so I'm pleased it reads as accurate to someone who has experienced it.
 
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