Right then. My first attempt at sci-fi. It's not serious, technical type sci-fi, more of the character driven type stuff.
I can't post all of it as I'm writing it to send to an anthology. But here's a snippet...
As usual, let me know what sucks!
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Clunk clunk... clunk clunk...
It sounded as though something was using a very large wrench to hammer out a very bad tune on the other side of the wall. Silver was used to hearing strange noises. Her cabin was close to the engine and that thing made all sorts of unusual noises. Particularly when she was trying to sleep. But this wasn’t the engine.
Clunk clunk...
The clock on the wall said that it was 4am. She knew that she’d have to start work in a couple of hours. She hated her job. TV back home had lied to her. Life aboard a spaceship was supposed to be exciting. All those adverts about working in space, about how glamorous, how awe-inspiring it was? All lies. A toilet on a space ship was still a toilet. And they still needed cleaning.
Clunk clunk...
Silver groaned and pressed the pillow over her face. Only one thing kept her from quitting her job. Two things, if she included her contract, but the main thing was the ship’s captain.
Justice Jamerson. Quite possibly, Silver thought, the most beautiful woman in the universe. She loved everything about her. Her name, her hair, her smile, her body... especially her body. And that captain’s uniform!
Silver sighed. She peeked out from beneath her pillow and looked over at her own uniform hanging from the back of the door. It was grey. In fact, it blended perfectly with the colour of the walls in her cabin.
Clunk clunk...
Captain Jamerson wouldn’t even notice her strolling through the ship’s corridors. Silver would just melt into the background, a grey shape against grey walls.
Although, she mused, even if the uniform was bright yellow the captain probably still wouldn’t notice her.
Clunk clunk...
With a frown, Silver thumped her fist against the wall. Silence descended on the room for just long enough for her to drift off to sleep, and then:
clunk clunk...clunk clunk... clunk clunk...
twice as fast as it had been before. Silver groaned loudly, threw the thin blanket from the bed and pounded her fists against the wall. “Shut up, shut up, shut up!” she yelled.
The noise stopped. Silver sighed and rested her forehead against the wall. “I hate my life,” she muttered.
Why?
Silver sat back and stared at the wall. Her heart beat a little faster than usual and she wondered if the lack of sleep was starting to make her hear things.
She chewed her lip thoughtfully and then pressed her ear to the wall.
“Hello?” she tried. She felt like an idiot.
Why?
It was definitely a voice, though Silver couldn’t work out if it was male or female. She thought it might be a computer, some sort of artificial intelligence. Or an alien. It would be an alien, knowing her luck.
“You keep me awake,” she said. “It’s driving me mad.”
Why? the voice asked again.
“Because of all the knocking! I need to sleep!” Silver looked at the clock and realised she’d have to get up. She placed a hand to the wall. “Just... be quiet, ok? Please?”
No answer this time, so Silver got out of bed. She gave the wall a frown and then turned away. Tonight, she decided, she would go to the bar and get very drunk.
I can't post all of it as I'm writing it to send to an anthology. But here's a snippet...
As usual, let me know what sucks!
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Clunk clunk... clunk clunk...
It sounded as though something was using a very large wrench to hammer out a very bad tune on the other side of the wall. Silver was used to hearing strange noises. Her cabin was close to the engine and that thing made all sorts of unusual noises. Particularly when she was trying to sleep. But this wasn’t the engine.
Clunk clunk...
The clock on the wall said that it was 4am. She knew that she’d have to start work in a couple of hours. She hated her job. TV back home had lied to her. Life aboard a spaceship was supposed to be exciting. All those adverts about working in space, about how glamorous, how awe-inspiring it was? All lies. A toilet on a space ship was still a toilet. And they still needed cleaning.
Clunk clunk...
Silver groaned and pressed the pillow over her face. Only one thing kept her from quitting her job. Two things, if she included her contract, but the main thing was the ship’s captain.
Justice Jamerson. Quite possibly, Silver thought, the most beautiful woman in the universe. She loved everything about her. Her name, her hair, her smile, her body... especially her body. And that captain’s uniform!
Silver sighed. She peeked out from beneath her pillow and looked over at her own uniform hanging from the back of the door. It was grey. In fact, it blended perfectly with the colour of the walls in her cabin.
Clunk clunk...
Captain Jamerson wouldn’t even notice her strolling through the ship’s corridors. Silver would just melt into the background, a grey shape against grey walls.
Although, she mused, even if the uniform was bright yellow the captain probably still wouldn’t notice her.
Clunk clunk...
With a frown, Silver thumped her fist against the wall. Silence descended on the room for just long enough for her to drift off to sleep, and then:
clunk clunk...clunk clunk... clunk clunk...
twice as fast as it had been before. Silver groaned loudly, threw the thin blanket from the bed and pounded her fists against the wall. “Shut up, shut up, shut up!” she yelled.
The noise stopped. Silver sighed and rested her forehead against the wall. “I hate my life,” she muttered.
Why?
Silver sat back and stared at the wall. Her heart beat a little faster than usual and she wondered if the lack of sleep was starting to make her hear things.
She chewed her lip thoughtfully and then pressed her ear to the wall.
“Hello?” she tried. She felt like an idiot.
Why?
It was definitely a voice, though Silver couldn’t work out if it was male or female. She thought it might be a computer, some sort of artificial intelligence. Or an alien. It would be an alien, knowing her luck.
“You keep me awake,” she said. “It’s driving me mad.”
Why? the voice asked again.
“Because of all the knocking! I need to sleep!” Silver looked at the clock and realised she’d have to get up. She placed a hand to the wall. “Just... be quiet, ok? Please?”
No answer this time, so Silver got out of bed. She gave the wall a frown and then turned away. Tonight, she decided, she would go to the bar and get very drunk.