Eye of Argon is hilarious, LOL. I'll never think of the word "lithe" the same way again. But unlike some cases where I've seen slapdash fiction by people who should know better---*cough* Harry Turtledove *cough*---I can't fault Theis that much. My writing was also pretty embarrassing when I was a teenager.The Eye of Aragon by Jim Theis . I saw a sample page of this book . I can never unsee what ive just read !!