Ok Guys,
I feel comfortable with this now. I hope you like this version. If you do it is largely thanks to your valued constructive input.
Just one or two tweeks. (til Christmas lol).
Steve
Earth is in the grips of intense global warming, this mostly caused by humanity’s incessant materialistic choices. Ten thousand individuals, each with their own specialist field and selected in complete secrecy are to travel in two huge space arks. They have one job, one hope, to find an alternative planet, and start again. The ship’s they travel in have many self-sustaining eco systems, sufficient to aid their long and unpredictable journey. Some consider these ships, a modern day Noah’s ark.
Selected, Jezzel discovers that due to a poorly contrived plan, his pregnant wife, Raqualla, is to travel on a different ark. This weighs heavy, emotionally, on both, but particularly for Jez, however having finally discussed this with Raq, they accept their offer in the belief their unborn baby may benefit.
Now aboard, Jezzel joins Melinda’s small radio communication group, they soon form a close-knit team. During their journey, this group question the material values that lead them to this point. Ultimately, they decide to compile a new constitution for the future. On Quest 2, Jez finds himself attracted by Roxy, having an instant rapport, they become almost inseparable. Their closeness has the questioning attention of others in Melinda’s team.
On a planet deep in the Milky Way, they discover a signal, emanating for thousands of years. Although this planet is now harshly uninhabitable, they expose tentative evidence, signifying man’s likely earlier existence. This raises deeply philosophical questions -- was this humanities original home, and, has this path been trodden before?
After months in deep space, Quest 2 loses contact with the other ark. Many feel left in a void, concerned for their family on Quest 1. Most wanting to hear they are OK, for some the reality is harsher, however Jez, more philosophical, associates the need for closure. Their mood very quickly lifts, when, finding an idyllic planet, they start colonisation. A couple of months pass, and groups have settled well. Some groups are ready to spread further afield and Melinda’s team head north.
There is still no contact with Quest 1. Jez seems strangely OK and declares he feels ready to move on with his life. Roxy, for so long blighted by her unrequited love of Jezzel, feels raised by this. However, soon after arriving at their encampment, new team member Kataleena is working closely with Jez. Roxy, now feeling surplus, makes a heart-wrenching choice to leave Jez behind, and head back to base camp. Disturbed, and waking in the middle of the night, and without provisions, she heads back to Jezzel. Alarmed to hear Roxy is on her way and suddenly stirring to her importance, Jez goes in search, when finally back together, they share the inner thoughts.