anthorn
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So i have another idea. This time the main characters are thieves, although one used to be a member of the order of the rose. The Singer/Songmage is using her abilities to mesmerize the crowd while she tells tales and sings, while the other thief steals the money.
Now the idea was for them to be caught and forced to go hunting for some legend on an abandoned island-or if they dont they will be turned in to the authorities.
Now the male thief is hiding a secret, he got the girls boyfriend captured because he was in love with her and jealous. He manages to sleep with her but messes it up by telling her what he did.
I also have a question or two to ask.
1. I start out with Nikita as a little girl travelling to Mana city as the prologue. Should i start chapter one with Nikita and Anthorn pulling their tricks years later, or should i start it from the Abandoned Isle after theIR Air ship has crashed and their relationship already in tatters and tell every thing in flashbacks.
2. Anthorn dies a heroic death or so Nikita thinks. He turns up half a year later though. Would it be plausible for Nikita to be so happy to see him again that she forgives him for betraying her boyfriend from before and start a relationship with him despite everything or would it be too contrived
Now the idea was for them to be caught and forced to go hunting for some legend on an abandoned island-or if they dont they will be turned in to the authorities.
Now the male thief is hiding a secret, he got the girls boyfriend captured because he was in love with her and jealous. He manages to sleep with her but messes it up by telling her what he did.
I also have a question or two to ask.
1. I start out with Nikita as a little girl travelling to Mana city as the prologue. Should i start chapter one with Nikita and Anthorn pulling their tricks years later, or should i start it from the Abandoned Isle after theIR Air ship has crashed and their relationship already in tatters and tell every thing in flashbacks.
2. Anthorn dies a heroic death or so Nikita thinks. He turns up half a year later though. Would it be plausible for Nikita to be so happy to see him again that she forgives him for betraying her boyfriend from before and start a relationship with him despite everything or would it be too contrived