Mary Hoffman
Writer
I've had the edits from Bloomsbury on City of Secrets and they arte quite light - fewer and less demanding changes than usual.
However anything even remotely appraoching a swearword has been cut. I don't mean in Talia, where people swear by the Goddess and that is apparently OK, but in 21st century london, among 17-year-olds.
"It was a bummer having a birthday so near the beginning of term" changed to "it was annoying" ,"She looked like ****" changed to "she looked terrible", "Jammy bugger" changed to "jammy so-and-so". etc. etc.
I think real life 17-year-olds would be saying "f***in' hell" and so on and I haven't chanced my arm on that. But the effect of these changes is to etiolate my characters. Is it worth having one more round of resistance with my editor?
I'd be particularly keen to hear from teenage fantasy readers on this subject. Thanks
Mary
However anything even remotely appraoching a swearword has been cut. I don't mean in Talia, where people swear by the Goddess and that is apparently OK, but in 21st century london, among 17-year-olds.
"It was a bummer having a birthday so near the beginning of term" changed to "it was annoying" ,"She looked like ****" changed to "she looked terrible", "Jammy bugger" changed to "jammy so-and-so". etc. etc.
I think real life 17-year-olds would be saying "f***in' hell" and so on and I haven't chanced my arm on that. But the effect of these changes is to etiolate my characters. Is it worth having one more round of resistance with my editor?
I'd be particularly keen to hear from teenage fantasy readers on this subject. Thanks
Mary