Tear apart my book, They Were Not Gods!

kalidah

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Hello everyone.

I wrote my novel, They Were Nots Gods: A Space-Age Fairytale, with teenagers and college-age sci-fi and fantasy fans in mind. This messageboard seems like a perfect place to get some feedback on it. The link to my web site is below, and the entire text is available to read for free on the iUniverse site. It is one of only a handful of science fiction stories publilshed by iuniverse to receive an editor's choice designation, but that doesn't make much difference if the target audience might find it dull or uninteresting.

Please be as critical as possible and look for specific things wrong with it. I'm not sensitive. I want to know if it would be worthwhile to advertise the book in magazines or on web sites. The whole book is only 170 pages, but if you just want to read the first section, "Planet Zero" (about 30 pages), I would much appreciate it.

Sincerely,

Jerry Hubert

http://jerryhubert.com/

iUniverse page for the book
 

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