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littlemissattitude

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Hypes said:
I'll post a new thread with my submission ASAP.
Thank you, Hypes. See what happens when I stay in bed sick one morning? You all get on to a whole new chapter. I'm proud of you all.

Now, I better go see what I missed out on, and see if it's time for my character to emerge yet.:)
 

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Okay, I just finished reading what I missed from earlier. Good show, everyone.:)

Esioul...Judith wants Holorernes head on a platter.:D Yes, I'd call that choice of names more than appropriate.:D :D
 

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Ah, I'm sorry to hear that.

I still reserve the right to tease you, mind.
 

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Hypes, would it be possible to mail all participants the edited chapter? For my part, I'd really like to have the finalised version handy. My mail is in my profile... But if you haven't finished editing yet, don't stress.

Thankies.
 

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Do you feel like adding anything on to Chapter 2, Sira? I can't think of anything at the moment.
 

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Welcome to the club, Esioul.

I'm trying to think of something since 10:00 AM...
Maybe we could decide how far the girls have come, let them feel secure, slow down, get caught by Haj and Alvis... dunno.

What do you think?
 

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Where are they now? Just sort of riding a long? Something exciting needs to happen now. Maybe let them get caught, and then something else happens at the same time e.g. they get chased by giant rats or something... ;)
 

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Yup, they left Falle on horseback and are heading probably south to get Holofernes head.

Hmm, your idea is quit good. Let them be caught by bandits, so that Haj and Alvis have to free them if they want the pebble.

Do you want to do the honour of shall I?
 

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You can. I can't think of how to write at the moment. (BTW, peopole, for Holoferne's head see my avatar. That is actually a painting of Judith holding it)
 

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Thanks, it's good. I've added on to it, but I can't think of what to add next. Do you think Judith should bite the bandits and they should get rabies and die and then they can steal all the plunder?
 

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Very good, everyone. I think it's getting pretty close to time for my character to appear. I hope so; I'm getting a bit itchy to contribute. But it's one of those gut-feeling things for me; I'll know the time when I see it.
 

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