Roxy's Fan fiction: I Knew I loved You <3

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:rolly2: Ok i ahve gone on with my rantings for two days of my time warp episode..so here I go with my own fan fiction titled:i knew i loved you....





Part one



(present day...a.k.a. max's third world time frame)


Max's perspective


sometimes I wonder what would have happened if me and logan had met in another lifetime....would we still feel as we do now? Hmm.life is so strange. I wonder if past lives exist. What even got me thinking about this in the first place was thsi book I found in the mail roon titled: Reincarnation. I parked my motorcycle aginst the a wall,and made my way up to Logan's penthouse. Am i going crazy or what?past lives? I must have been reading way to much of that book. I paused..was there something i was supposed to do today? I reminiced over my thoughts. I had a feeling today was important..but why? I walked up teh steps to Logan's. I felt my heart race....I felt myself get paranoid.what was today? I dropped my house keys on the floor. Damn it....stupid house keys...I dusted myself off, and opened the door. The room was quiet and dark. I thought Logan was supposed to be home..he better have agood excuse for standing me up or i swear i wont speak to him for amonth!!!! Just as i ws about to gather my thoughts on how i was going to give Logan apiece of my mind,the lights flickered on. "SUPRISE"!!!!!!I dropped my keys,and slammed the door shut. I clasped my hands over my face.Logan and all my frineds from work,plus my family Zack,Tinga, and Johndy were there. Tears strolled down my eyes. Logan looked at me, and smiled. I ran up to him,and threw my arms around his neck....."oh my gosh..I love you.".I pressed my lips against his. He palced his arms around my waist. He felt so warm up against me. I almost forgot we were in a room surrounded by people. Logan pulled me away from him, and snuck me off to the kitchen. "hey honey I have something special for you ..but I will give it to you later when everyone else is gone." I looked at him,and pouted. "do I have to wait?" I pulled him close for apassionate kiss. "tell me..." Logan closed his eyes, and breathed deeply. "Max,your killing me..." I grinned. We went back into the loud room where there was music palying and people dancing.

Logan placed his arms around my waist. "dont worry it will all be over soon.In the meantime..I think we should enjoy the company of our guests.." I looked at him. "I can't wait until later..." Logan looked nervous. "i uh... " he looked at the ground..."i hope you like it." I kissed him again. He ran a hand through my hair,and kissed me on the head. "I love you so much,Max. I hope you like this present....it is very important to me, but I just hope you dont get scared by it,because.."The music drained out Logan's voice. "WHAT LOGAN?I CANT HEAR YOU?" Logan sighed. He motioned towards the guests who were now surrounding me,and clapping their hands. Original Cindy came over. "hey Logan can I steal my friend for asecond,since you two are obviously crazy glued together. You haven't spent one second apart all evening!" Me and Logan looked at each other and laughed. "logan squeezed my hand...ok go spend time with the outside world. " I looked into his deep blue eyes. His warm eyes soothed my heart. I smiled at him. Original Cindy grabed my hand...."ok,ok..stop getting dreamy eyed already....you know you guys are completely nauseating!" I looked at original Cindy and laughed. "yea,i know. But when im with him,i feel like im walking on air...i closed my eyes i breathed deeply. Original Cindy laughed. "So you guys probably have a five year plan,huh? I can definately see you two walking down the aisle...." I glanced at the floor. "I want that so much, but im afraid ..Logan had been through a rough divorce, and his last fiancee totally trashed him...." Original Cindy placed ahand on my shoulder. "hey Max, i doubt he looks at them the way he looks at you..and besides I knew from when you two first started working together that you two were going to hook up." I looked at her. "no,yiur joking...." She looked at me. "Hey, the last place I saw that stuff was in the movies...but you two seem like a perfect match. Even if you guys stare at each other way to damn much!!!" I could hear screams and shouting from the other side of the room. I turned around. A birthday cake was glowing and flickering in the light. " happy Birthday.....happy birthday to you......





this is all for now. Please review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:kisses:
 
Part two

Logan's perspective



It was now a half hour past midnight. Most of our guests had left. I wondred what Max was up to. I was still nervous about the suprise i had planned for her. I wondered if she would get mador be super happy. I can never tell with Max. She is definately one emotional girl, but she is also incredibly amazing. that is why I am completely and totally in love with her. After my first failed marriage, not to mention my fiance Daphne wholeft me out in the cold I had basically given up all hope on finding true love. The world is s tough these days, and most people don't want to open up. So I decided to stay away from all thoughts of relationships, and decided to focus my atention on being "Eyes Only" , a crime fighting database of the future. Max was one of the people I was trying to help. However I had never counted on falling in love with her. I guess those things just kind of sneak up on you. I have never felt like this before. Ever. Makes me kind of glad that I am divorced and that things didn't work out with my other relationships of the past. I tryed to hide my feelings fom her for the longest time...but fate had other plans. Funny, every time we pushed eachother away, something always brought ustogether again. Kind of like we were destinedin the stars to be together. Believe it or not Max is a mushy romantic type like me. I never figured that, since she is soldier. However , Max never fails to suprise me! I ganced at my watch. My thoughts suddenly turned back to finding Max. Time for my big suprise.....



Part three

Max's Perspective





I yawned....Ah my first big suprise birthday party. Never had I felt so happy in my life...........and tired at the same time.
I could feel my eyes getting heavy. Why was I so tired.....all i could think about was that reincarnation book. Poor Logan wasprobably all excited over his suprise and hear i was thinking about a stupid book, and ready to fall asleep. I wondered where Logan was anyway.......I flipped open the reincarnation book. I let my eyes rest on a chapter titled: Past Lives. The picture on it had a heart with two flames coming out of it. The words on the bottom of it caught my eye:" soulmates know eachothe from the first time they meet. The eyes are the key to the soul, therefore love at first sight is a rumored legend of soumates. As each new lifetime begins they find eachother over and over again, until their soul has reached ascension and the two souls can reunite to become like one." "Max....there you are....Max, There is something that i want to talk to you about. It is very important. Max i want you to know that---" I could hear Logan's voice echo in my ears as my eyes fell heavy. Everything went black.












RoXy
**Reviews,reviews!!!!!
:kisses:
 
hey keep your pants on....im jsut getting stared....that is point of the story....she is in adream world.....but dont worry youwill see some interesting plot twists.....




:dead: <-----Roxy sticks her tongue out at sportzgirl...patience ....patience.....
 
Part four

* time change-2001 A.D. earth. present day.*


Max's perspective
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


"what do you think i am your damn maid?'!! Zack rolled his eyes. "Max,baby, im tired. you can at least clean my landry for me."
I gave Zack a disgusted look.
I couldn't believe i had been dating this loser for three years now.I couldn't stand him, and all he seemed to do was boss me around and treat me like a piece of horse sh*t.
Zack flipped his muscular biceps in front of his bathroom mirror. 'looking good....damn im hot.!"Zack ran a hand through his bleached blonde hair.
My life was a bitch.Literally. I think i was staying with egomaniac Zack because i had no where else to go. I mean i only could work part time since i went to school too, so school was basically more important to me. I wanted to get into agood college so i could find a good paying job,and get out of this dump. I gazed at Zack's dirty clothes stretched out on the floor. Zack stopped flexing his muscles and glanced in my direction.He shoved himself past me. "can you please move,max!your in my light!" I dropped the laundry basket i ws carrying on his foot. "CLEAN YOUR DAMN LANUNDRY YOURSELF YOU JACKASS!" I stormed out of the room and slammed the door behind me.

I arrived to my high school by foot. Zack usually gives me alift in his sportscar. Old Zacky, has money to burn.His rich daddy gives him whatever he wants. Taht is probably why the guy treats everything like it belongs to him. Like me. I cant afford tolive on my own, have my ow car, or do anything else but go out with him. I have nothing else to go home to. You see i am not only a only child,but an orphan.well sort of. My loser father walked out on me and my mom when I was barely five years old. I can still remember that day.My poor mom had to take care of me, and go to work,all on her own. I did have brothers and sisters, but they were killed in gangs . My oldest brother Danny ran away from home when he was twelve, while Mitch who was about eight at the time joined a gang, and a few years ago he got shot. I had two sisters too, but they were also shot and killed. Mitch's rival gang killed them. I never heard from Danny or my dad ever again, so i assume them to both be dead, and if they are alive,well they are considered dead to me. I mean what kind of crep runs out on his mom,after her husband leaves her? I dont think mom was the same after that. She started smoking and drinking like crazy,and eventually developed lung cancer, which then killed her.

I dont have any real close friends. all of Zack's friends are preppy snobs, and they look at me like im the gum on their shoe.I think they only act nice to me, because dad is the big man on campus. Wahtever he sas goes, so if he says to be nice to me, then it is simon says. My best friend is Tinga, who happens to be another pain in my ass. She totally kisses my butt big time,i think becasue she secretly has a thing for Zack. Sh is the only one who really invites me to hang out with her and stuff, but i heard her talking smack on me the other day. I think she is jsut pretending to bemy friend,because she wants Zack for herself.But hey,this is my life. Easy come,easy go. Ialso have to do everything Zack says,which includes not talking to anyone who is not rich or in social power of the school or town we live in. whatever. If i had the money,i would leave him in a heartbeat. I dont love him, but i have no other choice. Zack developed a obsession with me in my freshman year, and ofeered to take me into his crib. I thought he was nice, since i was living in a shelter at the time. Of course,that was all a front. Not like i could back out now, since if i did i would be out on the street. i seriously feel like i dont fit into this world. I mean is this as good as it gets?



Part five

Zack's perspective




I strolled down the hall way of Brooklyn High. All eyes turned to me. Yea i was the king of this place.I owned it,and everyone knew it. My frinds skip,Dean, and Red punched me in the arm I pounded Dean against a locker. "what did i say about touching my arm when i wear my letterman jacket? This baby is valuable,so watch where you keep your grubby paws!' Dean's eyes grew wide. Red laughed out loud. "yeah Zack,pound hm!"Skip cleared his throat. "Ah here comes the sex siren....Tinga. I don't know how you do it Zack. Juggling two women at once." Tinga dressed in a short black mini skirt and knee high black boots walked past me. She rolled her tongue and pursed her lips at me. I slid my hand up Tinga's thigh. Tinga smiled at me with lustiness in her eyes. "tell me again, how much i turn you on,Zack.' I grinned. " max has nothing on you baby."

the bell rang interrupting our little heated moment. "i gotta jet,Tinga. So I will see you later while Max goes to work?" tinga grinned. "so when are you going to dump that sorry bitch and commit to me?' I stopped for a moment. "tinga, you know i cant dump Max. She is good for my nice boy image. If i leave her, how will people think of me? I have to give agood front-----"
Tinga rolled her eyes. "whatever. I just think it wouldn't matter since Max has suitors of her own."
I grabbed Tinga's arm. "suitors?what?she is tied down with me!"
Tinga's eyes widened."you are definetly out of the loop. Everyone is talking about it. All throughout high school.All these years.'
I gave Tinga a puzzled look. No student would dare try to cross me.Especially with my girlfriend.Max. Hellno."is it a student ?"
"uh no....he is a teacher here."
I laughed . "funny Tinga. Funny."
Tinga grew serious.
" Uh,dont you see it. That one very good looking math professor here. I am max's best friend,after all. I see everything that goes around her life. She refers to him as "logan".
My face grew red with anger. Ah i remember now. I had always suspected something when sh ewas always staying after class to have help with math tutoring. Sh ealways seemed too eager to learn math. Figures. The math wasn't what was exciting.It was her teacher. I had always caught him looking at my girl with puupy dog eyes. Tinga gave me a cold hard stare. "she is always looking at him like a bitch in heat.....and when she talks about him.."
'what does she say?
tinga frowned. "well nothing. she jsut mentions how he always gives hard math tests ....but the way she says it. She gets afaraway look in her eyes.............."
I grabbed my backpack. The late bell rang. i was tardy for my next class. "im late now tinga.thanks alot. "
Tinga laughed.
"your next class-----is with who?'
i sneered,
"since when do you care what class i have.?"
Tinga grew cautious.
"uh,Zack, your schedule says you have math next........with "logan".
























reviews please!!!!
 
yea...so it is going to be like a sort of trance like state she is in................



RoXy:rolly2:
 
right now im kind of between things so i dont know what i want to happen next. I kind of have in mind a little face off between Zack/logan and tinga/max, but i wont be able to develop it just yet, because i have two hard math tests coming up and i have to study for them. So i hope you will be patient..until then...i have my cliffhanger of wondering what zack will do in Logan's class........................

RoXy:(
 
its funny...i had adream two nights ago where i was watching the new season of D.A. Max and Logan were totally making out in the entire first episode...........i woke up laughing...........



RoXy:eek:
 
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