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  1. DragonAether

    Discussion -- February 2018 75-word Challenge

    I'm in too and after nearly a couple month of full silence I should be able to be more present on the server, school struck pretty hard meanwhile...
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    February 2018 -- 75-word Story Challenge -- VICTORY TO BOB SENIOR!

    Mankind's fall "The end is near. We built our own doom my fellows gods. They destroyed everything on their way. Now they are coming for us." "Don't worry, they can't reach us here. We gave life to them, we can take it back." "Not anymore. It's too late." "What makes you be so sure about our...
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    First try (part. 1)

    Actually it is not, my first language is italian, thank you for the advices.
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    First try (part. 1)

    Thank you a lot for the time you spent on this and also for your many advices, I will try to follow them as much as I can.
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    Romance in SF

    I meant that it is something so important to be considered let's say a game changer.
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    Romance in SF

    Star Trek doesn't feature that much romance, in Star Wars there is quite a bit of romance, romance is normally associated with a more fantasy world I think. But I think it's perfectly ok to include a bit of romance into as long as there are a lot of tentacles involved. (Just my opinion) And...
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    First try (part. 1)

    I decided to try to write a Sci-fi story while I'm working on my other project, so this should be the first chapter of my story "Seeking glory". ------------------------------------------------------- The great day Rokal was looking at himself in the mirror, trying to hold the emotion, he had...
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    Thank you parson and victoria, yeah it's the slightly shorter version, there were just a bunch more words that gave a bit more emotion in my opinion, that was why I didn't liked the idea of reducing the words count. But thank you, appreciate the fact that it seems to work like that.
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    Repeating the subject

    Many thanks Teresa, and damn if your version was awesome. The problem is not that it do bad, but reading it seems to read a poetry that starts with the same word each time, but in this case I find it pretty annoying.
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    Repeating the subject

    I know for most of you may seem a stupid question, but I frequently find myself writing many times the subject, he, you, I and so on. A stupid example, He got near the microphone to start his speech, he was excited but scared while watching the crowded hall, he was talking but his mind was...
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    December 2017 -- 75 Word Writing Challenge -- VICTORY TO PETER V!

    The Last “Raziel, there is a present for you from Earth’s council.” “As if a present could be enough to forget the fact that they banished me on this colony ship.” He played the audio track of the present. “It’s a while that we don’t talk, I hope you will look after our present.” Raziel...
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    I did it, 75 words! but the other version is far better. At least in my head it is a master piece of literature. Just a question, for present do you mean a gift or the present "present", I mean, you understood
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    Discussions for the 100 word Anonymous Challenge for November 2017.

    I'm still here at my desk, trying to find an idea good enough that at least doesn't make me vomit.
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    Nice advice Parson, but I have already done that. I had an idea about a new story, it's dumb as Cathbat's left shoe. No offense
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    The problem is that I literally can't touch anything otherwise the story doesn't make any sense.
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    Ok, I give up, I can't make my story of 75 words.
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    Yup, I built an awesome story but it's 96/97 words and I can't take out that much. (Awesome at least for me, maybe for you is crappier than a pizza with pineaapple for an italian)
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    you are Italy too, because I'm your father Cath. Join the dark side we have pasta! Or said in Italian: Cath, io sono tuo padre And I just realized that this isn't the 100 words challenge.... F*********
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    Latin and Italian are as similar as a bird is similar to a whale. Only words are similar, but grammar is completely different
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    DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2017 75-word Writing Challenge

    No, I'm not that good with Latin and we do only translation from Latin to Italian. But it would be pretty cool to try.
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