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Thank you Victoria and Starbeast for your words. Being my first time I was afraid it would not stand up to the likes of your and others on here. So many talented writers.

Revenge I followed her across the snowy field aeons have past,it can't be her. I call to her she stops,turns. Blood dripping from fangs and claws. Red on white. I knew it wasn't you. Oh but it my dear. I died an unclean death, revenge will be mine. I can't allow you to do this. Think YOU can...

Have you played the game series " Fatal Frame" grate horror game. Made me jump quite a few times.

just watched Ergo Proxy love that series very dark.

the military may have had a raider hit on it before it crashed if not the a small team will have a better chance of finding it if they knew where to look. but if they know where to look someone would have more than likely told the constables and they may have called it in to there higher ups if...

you might want to take out the word filth and read "Alcohol,cigarettes,gambling are not permitted. it flows a little better.

Does her family know,if so then she should be able to go when she is needed. Maybe in a joking manner she should bring it up to her boyfriend and see how he takes it. You never know he may beleive her and stand by her side and try to help.

I grew up reading HP Lovecraft. I have lived his works since childhood. I also liked Poe, Emily Dickision etc. I read a lot of old poetry from 15,16,17,18,and 19 centuries . No one in this age can write like he did,it's all blood and guts. His horror was in the mind you never really knew what...

what is scribd? sounds like a punch line for a bad joke.

I like both just depends on the story .I even like when it is a fictious world set with modern events mixed in.

So it is good I like it. I would change the wording on the following line. "of course..... to read as follows. "I have forgotten magics that even the most skilled master mages don't know." I t may work better for you. Hope it helps.

WOW love the story is there more to it. I am new to site so still felling my way around.

I like you story so far would like to read more.