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  1. violetann

    What Do You Think Would / Should Open The Gate To Hell

    cutie furry bunny rabbit... think about it they are evil nothing can be that cutie :P
  2. violetann

    Writing business-related question

    "WOW.....what's that? Submit a short story and if people read it, I get paid? Where's that?" I meant if you start drying up from ideas may be having s submission page on your site so others can submit stories and they get a percentage if a paying person reads it.
  3. violetann

    Writing business-related question

    I've never realy thought i'd run out of ideas, i spose it can happen, may be thinkin about a submision side if your afraid of it.. then the writer gets a percentage if it gets read.
  4. violetann

    Writing business-related question

    may be the whole: ”I'll be spending several thousands at least, on web site hosting, marketing and hiring graphics artists to produce artworks for my sagas.” Is your problem your looking too big at first you need to start small and work up. First of all several thousands sounds a hell of a lot...
  5. violetann

    Fantasy is childish!

    i second that CarlottaVonUberwald... harry potter is appalling, but that’s more personal preference. If fantasy is childish.. how come most children cannot read most fantasy books out there.. for example the Silmarillion.. I know adults that can't read that, in fact I can’t I attempted to once...
  6. violetann

    balance between editing and style

    Yeah it isn't really a first person... More like a 3rd person POV. When I see what you mean by the whole none will every like everything you write. I went to Tolkien weekend, an event which happens local to me every year in and around the Sarehole Mill. In one tent there was a writer guy there...
  7. violetann

    balance between editing and style

    Hello everyone, i recently had some one else look at my work, yet i became quite confused since some of the crit which I had been given prior about describing things more and giving more explanations. Then I was told by someone else that I should cut down completely, which I found ironic since...
  8. violetann

    Getting published and reading

    Re: Reading The internet can be a LOT more biased and misleading than TV, movies and books at least as technical side. TV and movies etc have safe guards from governments and other sources.. They have to make sure things are accurate and not just made up.. at least the none fiction...
  9. violetann

    Most Shocking

    The stupidly weird weather Birmingham UK has... the uk is NOT meant to have earth quakes and tornadoes.... kind of freaked me out when we had a 2 earthquake and a tornado all in my short existence (all in a time space less than 18 years) oh and also seen your mom and aunties on hen nights...
  10. violetann

    hesitation during speach

    Thanks. I wasn't sure if it was acceptable to place ... in speech, though I guess it depends on what kind of context it is in like you both said.
  11. violetann

    Re-written Thieves

    I loved it Sam, even better than the first write, I could really feel what the charter was like and thinking from it. Great work :) I did understand what you meant by the first floor window and pulling it open not pushing it up like most windows are push open here, I think that was just a...
  12. violetann

    hesitation during speach

    How do you properly describe hesitation during speech? i.e.: "I'm sorry but your... your ice-cream has been eaten" he informed the girl. or: "I'm sorry but your" he paused hesitantly before continuing: "Your ice-cream has been eaten" he informed the girl. which is acceptable or are they both...
  13. violetann

    Help with romance

    if he's shy he might be reluctant to tell her, may even making a few hic-ups along the way to telling her… may be even she might tell him or ask him what’s wrong if she’s the more dominant.
  14. violetann

    FAMILY AFFAIRS with Larry Lovehart - Chapter Three

    *no offence just as a side note about the title there use to be (not sure if it's still on) a TV show called family affairs on channel five... the show was a bit of a crummy soap. Thought I’d just in case people get the wrong message from the title.*
  15. violetann

    Professionalism in writing

    Re: Ask your publishing questions here I meant if you try to and use all the resources you have i.e. computer reading software to read it so you can make sure you don’t misread and editing it 4 or 5 times to try to make sure everything’s perfect and asking close friends to read it but due...
  16. violetann

    im new plz what do u think of this............

    I guess you meant something beginning with S in the stars may be faeces would be better in the description; after all it won't offend anyone since: it's not a slang word. Also I’m confused by dose it mean they can’t see the sky is there like a dome over them or indoors? May be if your using...
  17. violetann

    Professionalism in writing

    Re: Ask your publishing questions here Might sound like a silly question, but: is it possible to become a writer even if, your not the best speller or perfect at grammar? If you love writing and attempt to correct them as best you can?
  18. violetann

    rose and thorns 2nd bit

    Thanks for the crit. Though I only ever see it as being a book on my pc, since, I didn't think anyone would be that interested in it. I’m glad it kept your attention. I had to write the ideas down and I wanted to write them in a way that there was: anyways something new or interesting that...
  19. violetann

    rose and thorns 2nd bit

    Thanks for the crit... I think your right about explaining the leather a bit more: it's a little confusing at the moment. About the swimming part I wasn't sure if you could dive into something with the coincidence of custard but I’m not sure on that part myself. has anyone got anything to say...
  20. violetann

    rose and thorns 2nd bit

    please crit on what you think of it and any spelling and grammour if you have time: " After about half an hour of treading through the sewers they came to a large tunnel with a canal with another pipe submerged under dark brown water with steps leading down into the water. He stopped for...
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