I see no problem in a small island somewhere where nobody would go. before the invention of planes and satellites you more or less had to trust the few people who had gone past that way to pass on what they saw and if no ships went that way there there was no information. if if the only ships...
"What type of audience would read this?" well I would but urban Fantasy is a guilty pleaser of mine. and I suspect me at any age past early teens would have.
things I liked. I liked the imagery and I liked the MC I thought the dark past and the hints you give as to her secrets work well for a...
I find it hard to read at all. (I am quite dyslexic) I have not actulry read a book for the last 3 years. but Ilisten to loads (I finished 3 in a week) I would hesataite to say that as long as you absorbe the books actuley reading them is not nessary execpt for the knolage of spelling and...
hard lession to learn that one.
but one way to avoid the WMD problem is to have your propolation methord not work so well near a planet. or even to have some obvious way to coulter it even if it is a political way I think in the honnor harrington series they get round this my having some sort...
I have a surface pro and it works very well as a veryligth laptop espicley with the clicky keyboard. I use office 365 or what ever it is called and I can holistley say no real complaintes
I think pepole have ansvered it here but my 2p is basicley this
simulated gravity in a spinning disk is based on how fast you are moving given everything else you move faster at the edge then in the center (very simple physiscs) so like wise if you spin your disk faster you get more grvaity...
my thoughts feel free to ignore them
the point is 2 fiold.
1. would he notice
and
2. would he draw the correct conclusion
if you want you could hve him noticing and confrunting him about it and being fobbed of with an answer like "on yer that walked inot a door"
personley I can never tell if...
depending on how he things somthing like Neo-men (new men?) you could try Iron-men but I think not.
maybe the best way would be to think what sort of person is your antagnost is he a imagnitive person dose he like dead languages or dose he like fancy acrinimies. if it is his name for them his...
just a thougt tha came out of my board gamming on monday and a few others
there was a game called "*somboddies* totley renamed spy game" it used to be called "no mister bond I expect you to die" but there was legal trouble
games workshop tryed to get a book off the shelves because it used...
I usuley use a line of ----- (what ever these are) but to be honest that is be ause when I am writing I use a line of ++++ to remind my self I left of writig a scene uncompleted
(btw is it common to have mutipail unfinished sceans in an uncompleted work my latest has about 5 I half finished)
very much my own personail opinion here and appoligies if it is the fault of a overley sentisive foruam modration not your perosnal chouice
can your charature speek in asterisics? I allways think that if you are going to sware (and it looks like you chr is the type who would vigrousley) they...
I am having to split this part because of it's lenght. I am realy greatfull for everyboddies advice and comments on this work
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I led the group off through the forest at a fast pace along the game trails and hunting paths I knew well. As we moved I took the time to study my new...
at the moment I can not remember if I did explain this later and if I did it will not be till they get time to explain everything qat the end so I will fill pepole in here
what you are catching it the edeg of a bigger ambush by the riftspawn and other creatures that has lead to william and his...
I am a product of all the things I have watched and read in my life so far. how can I avoid being infulanced by them?
you might even think that my intrest in scifi dates back to earley 80's when my fzmileys frineds got the first vhs player I had even seen and it had only one tape that of...
here is the second part of this story I hope this explains more of the things that the first part left off as I think I said before this is earler one of works and some if it is not as somth as I would like but see what you think.
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My mind reeled. First the whispering, rustling...
boneman
thanks for the comments. this is actuality one of my earlier pieces but my later ones are to long to be easley spit
I tend to avoid abrtations partlry for stylebut partley because of English
I think i did go a bit overboard on the top loading sean setting but I am trying to setup...
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