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Broken things He raised his arms high. "This is us. We are nothing but a broken things now, we'll be consigned to history as such and most likely forgotten in a few short decades. But know the things we taught still matter now. With power comes responsibly it's how you use that power that's...

I am intrigued as to how they are going to play out that part of the story. I just started the fourth book last week.

Also I was left really wondering how are struck I would of been in Bobbie's shoes imagine never seeing a blue sky, a bright sun, even an ocean. Emotionally it really struck a chord.

Finally finished this on UK Netflix. Having read the first three books I struggled with how they structured the second season but I may just be remembering the book wrong. Still the best sci-fi on tv right now. Shame I have to wait so long for season three here in the UK though. My one wish...

Every good story He clinked his immoral ale watching his brother intently. His brother was a marvel of godliness perfect white beard flowing locks, muscles, the whole nine yards. “You see Joule every story starts with a damsel,” He said. Pointing at an unbelievable beauty, “Now you start your...

So this has thrown me. Fun idea though. I'll be entering early this month as me and the good lady are off to Mexico on holiday on Sunday.

My vote went to Voyager der Mondes -- Holland I was left wondering what colourful persons are on this vessel. Guess I'll never know.

Bone Voyage The ship was ready, finally. It had taken the best part of a decade. She was beautiful. Bleach white with ivory masts and flesh toned sails. A thing of dreadful beauty. *** She his as she crossed the plains into those of the living. Water boiled under her, skeletons moved across...

2330 “This day will be remembered as the day we finally reached the end of this battle. It has been a long slog, many have fallen. Only two remain. This is a momentous time in OUR history never before has so little been given by so few…” RATTLE AND ROLL “1, 2, 3. Time to pay the piper...

This is how mine reads... I see the point being made, the first example is a lot better.

That makes sense. My last paragraph added nothing to the story and was clearly just filler. Thank you.

Guys and gals, I am having an issue with my character description. Everytime I start to describe someone it feels clunky and awkward. Its frustrating because I feel like the stories flow is broken or at least seriously diverted. Any hints and tips would be very much welcome. Regards Az

*Whistles This is a good'un. *scurries under nearest rock and starts making cave art.

The winners are in and the losers are the 'puppies' who have been trying to break the diversifying of SFF for a few years. Here is a link to an article in The Guardian about the awards. Hugo awards see off rightwing protests to celebrate diverse authors

Now some of you would of read my critique entry about my characters Lyrissa and Frederick. Now over the course of my planning they have changed so much from being bounty hunters Lyrissa is currently working for a government agency and Frederick is a scientist in a world where magic is king...

I right because I love the idea of sharing my and ideas with my friends one in particular. He has a similar mind set to me when it comes to fantasy. I am forever texting him ideas, character names and world laws. I trust him. Dreams are small just to have one thing punished (I had a letter...

My current WIP a fantasy/spy/crime is in the very early stages but what I've started doing is writing sections of it. Leave it a day or two reread it and edit on the fly. I have to say I am enjoying this approach at the moment my protagonist is evolving with each edit and I'm at just under 1000...

I always start thinking " Yep this is the one. This is fantastic" but then that is quickly followed by " Awww poop this isn't good at all." Unfortunately the 'Poop stage' comes the moment I edit something or notice a mistake. It knocks my confidence and then I walk away sulking. I have so...

Well that definition on Wikipedia left me more confused....

Congratulations @chrispenycate well deserved.