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  1. Rooky

    The Goddess Project Synopsis - 550 words

    Mrs CTG back again; I meant no offence; however; as a PR it has been drummed in to me that any synopsis; press release etc. is always meant to leave the reader wanting more. If a character is important to the overall story then of course they should not be left out. I guess the real art is to...
  2. Rooky

    The Goddess Project Synopsis - 550 words

    I'm sorry on Mrs's behalf. She means well, and I think she had a bit too much of cherry to go and add up to my bits. Thank goodness Goblin Princess was around to correct the matter. Apologies, Mr Ctg.
  3. Rooky

    The Goddess Project Synopsis - 550 words

    okay, the real Mrs CTG here; the main thing about a synopsis, is that it is just supposed to be a teaser; it should give enough information so as to leave you hungry for more! Enough said! Hugs and Merry Christmas to all! Viv aka Mrs CTG xxxxxxxx
  4. Rooky

    The Goddess Project Synopsis - 550 words

    Well, why don't you just try to make a very simple story by using names, or roles, and when that is ready, you add frilly bits as if you would be dressing the Christmas tree. Simply put (I know it's easier to say than do) create a skeleton and then add flesh (I hope that makes sense). For...
  5. Rooky

    The Goddess Project Synopsis - 550 words

    HB, Happy Christmas. It's me Ctg disguised as Mrs Ctg, so please, don't get too confused. What I'd like to say is that your story is very beautiful. There's no doubt about that. However, your synopsis is way too complicated, and I also feel that your main plot is hiding behind the window...
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    4.09: Lancelot Du Lac

    Having just watched this weeks episode I have to add my 2 pence! I appreciate that this is a family show and kids love it;a friends daughter came to our wedding in August and I wore a Medieval style dress and she is still talking to her friends about going to a Merlin Wedding! But is there to be...
  7. Rooky

    For critique -- the bio to go with my press materials

    Hi again, Teresa! I hope you don't mind but I have taken the liberty of doing a little rewrite/tweek of your biog. Obviously, as I have not had an opportunity to talk to you, some of what I have written may not be what you are wanting say or accurate. I am just going on what you have written...
  8. Rooky

    Discussion -- September 2011 Challenge

    Re: Discussion September 2011 Writing Challenge Way to go Dusty Zebra, I am looking forward to October's theme; I definitely have the bug! I would also like to thank Stormfeather for the (not so) short list mention, it was very much appreciated. And a big thank you to hubby for giving me his...
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    Discussion -- September 2011 Challenge

    Re: Discussion September 2011 Writing Challenge
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    Discussion -- September 2011 Challenge

    Re: Discussion September 2011 Writing Challenge Well, I have posted my very first Seventy-Five Word Challenge! I hope it's not too awful and, if it is, you'll be gentle with me!
  11. Rooky

    75 WORD CHALLENGE -- September 2011 -- TDZ VICTORIOUS!!

    re: September 2011 SEVENTY-FIVE WORD WRITING CHALLENGE -- CLOSED Experiments in Reality She woke, drenched in sweat; “Oh God”, she said, “How long has it been”? “I should have stayed; it’s all gone, why did I listen to ‘them’?” “But, there’s no time to wallow, ‘they’d’, seen to that”...
  12. Rooky

    Firefly

    I appreciate I am coming in very late here, but, I have only just joined this fabulous forum. So forgive me if this has already been said. The whole point of it, according to the originator and genius, Joss Whedon, was that as space is in general terms called, 'the last/final frontier', why not...
  13. Rooky

    I am a Zombie

    That is great Mouse, I hope you are taking full advantage of the mention, may I ask what publication or website the the review was in/on? :o PS Woohoo my very first post!
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