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  1. MattyK

    Nanowrimo

    Last year was my first NaNoWriMo and I only found out about it on 3rd November. Still managed to finish by the 24th at around 52k (I think) and while the first draft was dross (as to be expected) it's something I'm very happy with and will easily be able to work into something more professional...
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    Back it up

    Laptop usually has the most up to date copy, occasionally back up to USB when I remember and I have a Microsoft Office Live account too and back bits up there. I lost half a chapter once and it was enough to drive me half crazy. Can't imagine losing an entire novel!
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    A Short Story For Y'all

    D'oh! Oh yeah, ignore that, everyone! Anyway, as suggested, here is the first half of the story. If you like it and want to read the rest, feel free to head over to the blog thingy on the link in the first post! Writing the Past Light poured out of the downstairs front window onto a small...
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    APRIL 2010 WRITING CHALLENGE -- Boneman our victorious winner!

    Jeff and Graham Explore a Planet ‘Where’d that planet come from?’ said Jeff, ‘shall we take a look?’ ‘Yup,’ replied Graham, thoughtfully. They piloted their small shuttle down to the surface and miles below their orbiting ship, the two astronauts set about exploring the planet...
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    A Short Story For Y'all

    I wouldn't mind a bit of critiquing and glaring plot holes such as the son not knowing the exact date (how'd I miss that!?) would be appreciated. I was concerned that it might be a bit long for a post on here which is why I posted it as an external link. Didn't want to annoy anybody! Edit: And...
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    A Short Story For Y'all

    Well, for anyone who wants to read it, really. I wrote this for my final assessment on the short Open University writing course I recently completed. I was limited to 1,500 words but had to strip quite a bit of detail out to make it fit. I've fleshed it back out and bunged it on my new blog...
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    The Big Question

    My main issue was with this bit. How likely would it be that people living like cavemen would be able to start a world war, whether they wanted to or not? Also, you need to convey when these wars took place in relation to the story that is being told. One world war that resulted in people...
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    Are you a night writer or a day writer.

    On my short writing course, I have a CD with interviews with different writers and most of them say the best time to write is in the morning. I tried and tried this and I just can't do it. I usually get up, browse the net for a bit, If I try to write I get nowhere. Any time in the rest of the...
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    On Creating Imaginary Worlds: Science Fiction

    Odd question for you all (or whoever is feeling sciency today!). How big would the sun look from one of Saturn's moons compared to how we see it here on Earth? I'm guessing it wouldn't be a pin-prick sort of thing but I don't have a clue really. Any thoughts?
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    Well it's pretty much over in all but a few timezones. Congratulations to everyone who took part. Whether you reached 50,000 words or not, it's still one hell of a cool thing to try and win or lose it's a great learning experience and challenge (I thought so anyway!). See you again on NaNoWriMo...
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    Music Rooms - another NaNoWriMo excerpt

    Two things: First of all, this this section, I think the repetition of the word "strings" stands out a bit and secondly, you missed a line from the end of the penultimate paragraph... She tore the rugs on the floor, and then littered them with the debris that now filled the room...making sure...
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    Yep, I found that one out too. Definitely did a bit of that. I was sat here thinking "Nah, don't think I did that". Then I remembered that I had one of his friends knock him off his motorbike which led to two broken legs and a dislocated shoulder (and he was a bass player). Yep, two scenes...
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    Aww, I love a happy ending!
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    I'm done! Well, It's not finished but I hit 50,000 words this afternoon. Still can't believe I managed it. The end of the story is not far away either. Should get it finished tomorrow or the day after. Phew!
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    Music Rooms - another NaNoWriMo excerpt

    I'm certainly no harp enthusiast but you could do one hell of a lot of damage to a harp, I think. Depends on the music stand, I suppose. It's it's one of those cheapo folding aluminium ones then her first concert is probably trapping her fingers, but assuming it's a solid and sturdy thing then...
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    Music Rooms - another NaNoWriMo excerpt

    She There's nothing wrong with the word lovely, I'd maybe just use something else such as "wonderful", "hypnotic" etc. Just a personal taste thing, I think. have done This bit confuses me slightly. Has Riaka killed Eron? At the start it sounds as though he's just walked out of the room...
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    I think I would do the same. This year I didn't find out about NaNoWriMo until the 3rd November so didn't have any time to plan, I just started writing and making it up as I went along (and consequently, I don't think my story is as good as it could have been). I don't think improvising has...
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    NaNoWriMo - 09

    I just passed 40,000 today! I'm on to my last two or three chapters now, I know what's going to happen, how it will end. I might actually do this! Never would have thought it was possible! Although, it's not a great story, I've just churned it out, needs a lot of work still!
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    How Would You Spell the Abbreviation for Microphone?

    I'm going to let this conversation carry on for however long it does, I don't care any more. All I'm fixating on is the "when" I got in this quote as opposed to an "if" :D
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    How Would You Spell the Abbreviation for Microphone?

    Then I'll call it settled before it begins, thanks for the input guys. It was exactly what I was hoping for!
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