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Amos Trask, if only for his reluctance to die from random stomach wounds...

As far as I've heard most agents only charge a percentage of your advances and royalties, which means if your book doesn't sell then they don't make any money from you. Check the publishing forum there's lots of stuff on there...

The only ways I know of to write upside down have already been posted, but if you are sending the MS electronically how is the publisher going to read the upside down part?

Where do you watch it online Connavar? I used to use TV Links but the only host that worked for me was Veoh and now all I can get from them is 5 min previews...

I don't remember seeing the Haitan wearing the pendant, although there could be more than one pendant, I don't see what the Haitan's agenda would have been for taking Peter's memory though...seeing as the Haitan wants to protect Claire and help her father, and thats what Peter's been doing...

It'd be kinda hard for it to blow up, being there being no gunpowder and all, I'm also trying to have a magic free civilization as well...but I think I know what you mean, its kind of lacking something...

Peter was still wearing the pendant when he was showed the box, the Irish guy said it was something that gave him Peter's name. I don't see how would the pendant have given the guy Peter's name? I reckon its got to be a letter or something from whoever put Peter in that container, something...

Thanks for your comments, I appreciate it. Can anyone comment on the actual content as opposed to the grammar, is it interesting?

No idea why the last bit is in a different font, tried everything I could to change it...sorry about that...

Ok this is by no means the full opening but I have taken into account your advice and re-worked it a bit, I've also added a bit more to give more insight as to why Fane is running. I kept the opening the same because I cannot think of another way to start it at the moment. Fane cursed as...

Thanks for your comments. I'll rework it taking on board what you've said and post again soon.

Thanks I'll check out the site.

As far as I can surmise from books that I've read and posts on forums you need to include a new paragraph when there is a point of view change or a new person speaks but thats as far as I know and I have a few questions. Where do you use indents? How many spaces do you use for an indent...

Rick stood next to the sofa in disbelief, he couldn't believe what he'd just done, he quickly shook Julie awake and got dressed without a word. Julie gave him the purse, got dressed in a hurry and walked out of his life forever. Rick entered the bedroom carrying the purse, it was stained with...

This is a possible opening to my novel. Just wanted to see what people thought. Fane cursed, he heard shouts and cries echoing amongst the trees behind him indicating that he had still not lost his pursuers. They had been tracking him all night since he had escaped them in Frayton. He...

Novel: The Watchers Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 5,262 Status: Started writing again after a large gap due to going back to university and having mountains of work to do (Literally)

Rick entered the bedroom carrying the purse, it was stained with the blood of his now dead wife Lindsey. He froze as his gaze drifted over the dresser. Had she moved it, or had someone else been there? He had seen it on the coffee table downstairs, which was funny, because it normally sat on...

I'm going back and re-reading Magician, Silverthorn and Darkness at Sethannon and then will probably re-read the empire series.

I found that funny when I read that too, just making me remember Nakor dancing about and dodging the guards last time.

I suppose, but the good things he gets Bek to do are killing the bad guys, I suppose Bek would find that fun anyways.