UltimateUniverse900
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One MC was born to a Japanese father and mother, who both were apart of this fictional well known and respected organization clan, that also specializes in a fictional martial arts. Set sometime in the near-future, supernatural beings start to cause havoc across the globe and the MC's father's family members on his side of the family fell victims due to them. He then finds out his wife is a supernatural as well when their new born MC shows some spider-like features. Then it's revealed the mother was a spider demon, so the father then has the mother and new born son killed in a fire, which the mother sacrifices her powers so her MC son can survive. The father then sets up a tournament of all different fighters from around the world to compete for a prize money and to inherit his organizations technology that will help combat the supernatural. The MC son is one of the participants.
This MC was born to both American parents. It starts the father was this powerful and rich man that had traveled the world, learning various martial arts and had various masters that would teach him at his private home. One day he stumbled upon this unique cult near Thailand which he became a member of, which he later on developed this bloodthirsty mindset. He had a son with a woman cult member, which he had no idea about and doesn't learn until years later. When he returns home to the US he ends up meeting a woman who he settles down with and has a son, the MC. But by age 6, the father notices something about his son that he's a demon, which makeshim more bloodthirsty and abusive. The mother then confesses and reveals that she's a a demon and was a member of a Phoenix clan, which the father was implanted with the mindset of the Phoenix clan at war with his cult. The father and mother battle, with the mother then escaping with the MC son. They are later tracked by the father's organization members and presumed killed, but the mother sacrificed herself to save her MC son who survives. Then the father officially takes over the cult, brings his power back to the US, takes over a well respected fighting competition tournament held every few years and turns it into a death match blood sport, where only the most ruthless survive and he meets the first son he had with the cult woman member who joins him as his right hand man. The father and evil son work together in charge of the tournament, having taken souls from the fighters they've beaten in the past. The MC son will enter the tournament to get revenge on his father and face his half-brother.
They sound like two similar stories. What can I do to make them not too much the same?
This MC was born to both American parents. It starts the father was this powerful and rich man that had traveled the world, learning various martial arts and had various masters that would teach him at his private home. One day he stumbled upon this unique cult near Thailand which he became a member of, which he later on developed this bloodthirsty mindset. He had a son with a woman cult member, which he had no idea about and doesn't learn until years later. When he returns home to the US he ends up meeting a woman who he settles down with and has a son, the MC. But by age 6, the father notices something about his son that he's a demon, which makeshim more bloodthirsty and abusive. The mother then confesses and reveals that she's a a demon and was a member of a Phoenix clan, which the father was implanted with the mindset of the Phoenix clan at war with his cult. The father and mother battle, with the mother then escaping with the MC son. They are later tracked by the father's organization members and presumed killed, but the mother sacrificed herself to save her MC son who survives. Then the father officially takes over the cult, brings his power back to the US, takes over a well respected fighting competition tournament held every few years and turns it into a death match blood sport, where only the most ruthless survive and he meets the first son he had with the cult woman member who joins him as his right hand man. The father and evil son work together in charge of the tournament, having taken souls from the fighters they've beaten in the past. The MC son will enter the tournament to get revenge on his father and face his half-brother.
They sound like two similar stories. What can I do to make them not too much the same?
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