Greeting Tony.
I got it in two tries on amazon (hint:
eople try searching amazon and it should only take two tries).
Unfortunately I don't stop there so I have to admit I read the sample. I say unfortunately because I have to agree with the two star review. It seems almost as though you have adopted a style of writing sure to lead to trouble.
What I mean by that is that the prologue demonstrates a -complete disregard for punctuation- an avant garde attempt at punctuation - or a severe need for editing.
The beginning of chapter one would give the appearance perhaps of the last because most of that chapter seems to try to adhere to good punctuation as best it can. Yet as we reach the most exciting part it digresses to a complete lack of period usage once again. Now if you were e.e. cummings I wouldn't flinch, but I detected something that lacked e.e.'s style.
The second chapter returns the reader completely to that seeming disregard once again and is quite disturbing both in reading and the fact that there are two five star reviews. I could swallow those if they had been prudent enough to warn the reader about the punctuation problems. But they do not.
Also there seem to be several forms of elipses used
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These above I recognize
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And though the above might look like progressions they are scattered a bit differently in the text.
Once again these are style choices you've made and they might hurt this if people heed the warning in the two star review and do as I did and read the sample. I did find the story-line engaging; but a visit to an editor might improve the whole piece.
This is just my opinion and who knows what we might see once everyone else figures out where your work is. I could be missing something.
