Gawian
Starforger
Very simple. Yay or Nay?
I don't really like the start of my WIP, but I think I have a solution for it.
The story is that one faction finds out about a new weapon another faction is developing and wants to destroy it. Thing is, I've done a lot of mentioning about how bad and horrible this weapon is without giving the reader much clue as to what the heck it is at the minute, so I had an idea, but I'm not sure if it's advisable from a reader perspective.
I want to start the book with a fight scene. Technically. It's actually a recording of a fight scene that the main characters will be watching, but from the readers perspective, they won't know it's a recording until after the fight is over.
And I think fight is a generous term for what will happen. More of a clusterf... you get the jist.
Three good guy ships try to surprise attack the big bad weapon. Two get completely decimated and one limps away very embarrassed. The bad guy ship seems fine.
So yeah, starting a story with a fight scene.
Good idea, or a what-the-hell-are-you-thinking-you-need-help-dont-ever-do-that idea?
I don't really like the start of my WIP, but I think I have a solution for it.
The story is that one faction finds out about a new weapon another faction is developing and wants to destroy it. Thing is, I've done a lot of mentioning about how bad and horrible this weapon is without giving the reader much clue as to what the heck it is at the minute, so I had an idea, but I'm not sure if it's advisable from a reader perspective.
I want to start the book with a fight scene. Technically. It's actually a recording of a fight scene that the main characters will be watching, but from the readers perspective, they won't know it's a recording until after the fight is over.
And I think fight is a generous term for what will happen. More of a clusterf... you get the jist.
Three good guy ships try to surprise attack the big bad weapon. Two get completely decimated and one limps away very embarrassed. The bad guy ship seems fine.
So yeah, starting a story with a fight scene.
Good idea, or a what-the-hell-are-you-thinking-you-need-help-dont-ever-do-that idea?