Faisal Shamas
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An opening scene of a romantic sci-fi I am planning..
The door of the train remained open as if held by some force of magic. I stepped around, confused and nervous, a cell phone held close to my ear, taking glimpses at the girl. My heartbeat rose with every look, arrows of cupids fired right and left, those eyes tempting me to get into that train. I had never expected myself going through or doing what I was. Five minutes earlier, I had come out of the same train, a twenty six year old man, who knew nothing about love, and had never been in a relationship before.
The magic of love they would tell me. “It can happen to anyone, at any place, at any time” I never believed.
The time was 13th of March, 2014, my birthday. The place, a metro station.
It was a chilly minus ten degrees in Chicago. I could feel the cold of winter air on my face as I stepped out of that train, a bag tied around my chest. Pushing forward with the crowd, in half steps, slow steps, busy on my phone, I checked the mail for a lucky response from a university where I had applied. Nothing. Then I looked up. On the first glance, I didn’t notice her. It was a mere look up and a look down. Then I felt something, a soft brush of another shoulder against mine. I turned left.
Hair of silk flashed in my eyes. A breath that smelled fresh as roses. A golden lock hung loose as she looked around towards me. Rising along soft fur of a winter coat was a cute face; chubby pink cheeks, a small forehead, and blue eyes that shined behind light spectacles. She excused and moved forward.
I felt a surge of blood across my heart; first arrow of cupid had found its target. I turned around and pulled the phone close to my ear, pretended to be on a call, just to see her walk into the metro. What? Why? I didn’t know. I couldn’t see anything else. Something had happened to me. Something wonderful.
The train didn’t move. Some great luck. Seconds ticked away. I held the phone tighter and stepped around, taking glimpses of the beauty through a door that for some inexplicable reason won’t close. Her eyes twinkled, small face shined like a sun, attracted me. Small steps towards the train, small steps sideways, still on the phone, amidst confusion. Noise of people inside the train increased as the door remained open. A tall man shouted at a metro officer outside who was talking on a cordless.
Another look at the train and a thought. Had it by some magic stopped for me? “A silly thought” World was giving me a hint, a chance. “Sillier”
“Stop it and turn around, go your own way”
I had crushes on girls before. I had gone through these rare moments of magic. But every time I stopped myself. Convictions had become cliques that would play inside my mind. “Not good for the career” “Wastage of time” “Love is ordinary” “Not yet” But the door remained open, like Pandora’s Box waiting to be opened. I realized that if kept standing around, it would close and the train would move, and she would be gone, lost forever with these moments, and I would be lonely. Or, if I got into that train, maybe I could talk to her, bring someone special into my life.
“Love doesn’t happen by itself. You have to make it happen.” I had read once in a poem. But “would she be interested?”
I ran my eyes through the crowd, and stopped at her face. She was smiling; a shy and a cute smile, a smile that seemed to scream out loud and clear; “Make me yours.” For one time in my life, I made a good decision. That smile lead me to make that decision.
The door closed right after I entered. Perfect timing. World seemed on my side. I stood next to her, felt my heart throbbing away. The train started moving.
The door of the train remained open as if held by some force of magic. I stepped around, confused and nervous, a cell phone held close to my ear, taking glimpses at the girl. My heartbeat rose with every look, arrows of cupids fired right and left, those eyes tempting me to get into that train. I had never expected myself going through or doing what I was. Five minutes earlier, I had come out of the same train, a twenty six year old man, who knew nothing about love, and had never been in a relationship before.
The magic of love they would tell me. “It can happen to anyone, at any place, at any time” I never believed.
The time was 13th of March, 2014, my birthday. The place, a metro station.
It was a chilly minus ten degrees in Chicago. I could feel the cold of winter air on my face as I stepped out of that train, a bag tied around my chest. Pushing forward with the crowd, in half steps, slow steps, busy on my phone, I checked the mail for a lucky response from a university where I had applied. Nothing. Then I looked up. On the first glance, I didn’t notice her. It was a mere look up and a look down. Then I felt something, a soft brush of another shoulder against mine. I turned left.
Hair of silk flashed in my eyes. A breath that smelled fresh as roses. A golden lock hung loose as she looked around towards me. Rising along soft fur of a winter coat was a cute face; chubby pink cheeks, a small forehead, and blue eyes that shined behind light spectacles. She excused and moved forward.
I felt a surge of blood across my heart; first arrow of cupid had found its target. I turned around and pulled the phone close to my ear, pretended to be on a call, just to see her walk into the metro. What? Why? I didn’t know. I couldn’t see anything else. Something had happened to me. Something wonderful.
The train didn’t move. Some great luck. Seconds ticked away. I held the phone tighter and stepped around, taking glimpses of the beauty through a door that for some inexplicable reason won’t close. Her eyes twinkled, small face shined like a sun, attracted me. Small steps towards the train, small steps sideways, still on the phone, amidst confusion. Noise of people inside the train increased as the door remained open. A tall man shouted at a metro officer outside who was talking on a cordless.
Another look at the train and a thought. Had it by some magic stopped for me? “A silly thought” World was giving me a hint, a chance. “Sillier”
“Stop it and turn around, go your own way”
I had crushes on girls before. I had gone through these rare moments of magic. But every time I stopped myself. Convictions had become cliques that would play inside my mind. “Not good for the career” “Wastage of time” “Love is ordinary” “Not yet” But the door remained open, like Pandora’s Box waiting to be opened. I realized that if kept standing around, it would close and the train would move, and she would be gone, lost forever with these moments, and I would be lonely. Or, if I got into that train, maybe I could talk to her, bring someone special into my life.
“Love doesn’t happen by itself. You have to make it happen.” I had read once in a poem. But “would she be interested?”
I ran my eyes through the crowd, and stopped at her face. She was smiling; a shy and a cute smile, a smile that seemed to scream out loud and clear; “Make me yours.” For one time in my life, I made a good decision. That smile lead me to make that decision.
The door closed right after I entered. Perfect timing. World seemed on my side. I stood next to her, felt my heart throbbing away. The train started moving.