ralphkern
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I am just sketching out some blurb ideas for Endurance/Venture, the side-quel to Endeavour. (Endurance was the original name, which was also the name of a ship that is used in the story, however due to Interstellar's ship being called that I am considering changing it)
At the moment I'm not looking for an in-depth critique on the blurb itself, merely stylistically which seems better.
The book is written in the 1st person, and is generally a SF mystery. It starts off as a whodunnit before segueing into a military thriller before turning Big Idea. Hard SF under pins the story - for those that have read Endeavour, it is of the same universe, but the concept is it follows cops and intelligence agents in this universe rather than explorers and scientists. The trilogy arc I have is that either of these books can form a starting point, with the other being book 2. Book 3 is the only one that has to be read in sequence after the first two. (The characters of Endeavour and Endurance will have a protagonist/antagonist relationship with each other in book 3 - essentially, the reader can back which team they want)
Anyway -
1st Person version:
This may be a golden age for most. We’re taming the planets of the solar system and we’re exploring the nearest stars. I’m not a philosopher by trade, I’m just a cop, but even I can see humanity is reaching its potential.
Then something happened. Something that changed all that. Something terrible and that was only the start of it – The murder of a whole moon, hundreds dead and people throughout the worlds terrified.
They sent us to find out what happened. We’ve seen things, the beauty of space, how cold it can be and how near death we all are. We hunted those responsible from one end of the solar system to the other and beyond.
And where we’ve found ourselves, so far from home and knowing what we know now makes us question everything.
This is our story.
Endurance. The sequel to Endeavour and the continuation of the Sleeping Gods story.
Versus
3rd person version
It is a golden age. The far flung worlds of the Solar System have been tamed and the nearest stars are being explored, For most, life is perfect. Humanity is close to realising its true potential.
Yet one event shatters this idyllic future. Io a moon of Jupiter is destroyed and hundreds of people are dead. Whether an act of war, terror or simple madness, those responsible must be called to account. A team is hastily assembled with one goal - Find who did it and bring them to justice.
The hunt will take them on a journey from the burning deserts of Africa to the cosmopolitan space stations of Jupiter and far beyond.
And what they discover out there, will change everything.
Endurance. The sequel to Endeavour and the continuation of the Sleeping Gods story.
At the moment I'm not looking for an in-depth critique on the blurb itself, merely stylistically which seems better.
The book is written in the 1st person, and is generally a SF mystery. It starts off as a whodunnit before segueing into a military thriller before turning Big Idea. Hard SF under pins the story - for those that have read Endeavour, it is of the same universe, but the concept is it follows cops and intelligence agents in this universe rather than explorers and scientists. The trilogy arc I have is that either of these books can form a starting point, with the other being book 2. Book 3 is the only one that has to be read in sequence after the first two. (The characters of Endeavour and Endurance will have a protagonist/antagonist relationship with each other in book 3 - essentially, the reader can back which team they want)
Anyway -
1st Person version:
This may be a golden age for most. We’re taming the planets of the solar system and we’re exploring the nearest stars. I’m not a philosopher by trade, I’m just a cop, but even I can see humanity is reaching its potential.
Then something happened. Something that changed all that. Something terrible and that was only the start of it – The murder of a whole moon, hundreds dead and people throughout the worlds terrified.
They sent us to find out what happened. We’ve seen things, the beauty of space, how cold it can be and how near death we all are. We hunted those responsible from one end of the solar system to the other and beyond.
And where we’ve found ourselves, so far from home and knowing what we know now makes us question everything.
This is our story.
Endurance. The sequel to Endeavour and the continuation of the Sleeping Gods story.
Versus
3rd person version
It is a golden age. The far flung worlds of the Solar System have been tamed and the nearest stars are being explored, For most, life is perfect. Humanity is close to realising its true potential.
Yet one event shatters this idyllic future. Io a moon of Jupiter is destroyed and hundreds of people are dead. Whether an act of war, terror or simple madness, those responsible must be called to account. A team is hastily assembled with one goal - Find who did it and bring them to justice.
The hunt will take them on a journey from the burning deserts of Africa to the cosmopolitan space stations of Jupiter and far beyond.
And what they discover out there, will change everything.
Endurance. The sequel to Endeavour and the continuation of the Sleeping Gods story.